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August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
At least she felt remorse.I just hope that Erestor will forgive for his own sake.I hate myself when I hold anger towards another too long.
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August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Either i'm experiencing deja-vu or some text is repeated twice in chapter 33. :P Anyway, I've been following your story for a while and I think it's a very good story.
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August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I could be wrong but Celebrian seems to be coming off as the not so nice person in this story (not including Erestors would be rapist).
The story has merit though there are some pretty bad spelling errors that are rather obvious ones that could easily be corrected. Other then that, it's a cute story.
The story has merit though there are some pretty bad spelling errors that are rather obvious ones that could easily be corrected. Other then that, it's a cute story.
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August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
BITCH! I think we all know who 'she' is.
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August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent!!! more please?
*Eowyns elixure
*Eowyns elixure
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July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG u can't leave it there! gees I was actually under the impression that you had written 36 chapters instead of 32 for some reason so my dissapointment was deep. How come I always manage to read a long story just when the last chapter ends on a cliffy and it gets even more exciting? Oh well I LOVE this so please, please update soon!
*Eowyn elixure
*Eowyn elixure
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July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A great story to read. Poor Erestor can never catch a break can he? Update soon please.
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July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!! :( *cries*
What have you done?!?!!
Update soon, please..
Please.
^^
What have you done?!?!!
Update soon, please..
Please.
^^
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July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this cliffy is cruel.....please continue asap.
Perhaps I´m crazy, but Celebrian has something to do with this, hasn´t she?
Perhaps I´m crazy, but Celebrian has something to do with this, hasn´t she?
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July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
and the plot thickens. :P I liked this chapter, although it seem a bit short for my tastes. I was glad to see that this story was updated; I hope you'll update again soon.