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for Thawing the Ice

by Brenna

person Cassie
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great update mellon nin! You may feel sorry for Celebrian but I most certainly do not! She got just what she deserved in my opinion plus, she betrayed my favorite elf and that is a crime that can NEVER be forgiven LOL. Update soon please.
person HHS
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I feel sorry for her too.At least she admitted her folly.
person zenah
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hello, very good story you have here. i never like celebrian and now i hate her, thank you for this loveley story and i hope that you will update soon and make another sex scene, hehe a little sexier would not hurt so much, anyhow i am a nex revewier and i hope that the next chapters will be coming soon :)
person ramie
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahh!! Do not leave us here!!!
I love this story, you write very well. I hope to read more from this story very soon. - I wonder if Celebrian would come forth and apologise to Erestor AND Glorfindel... I hope she does.
Anyhow, I can't wait to find out what happens.

cheers
ramie
person mirestelfea
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
as always a very enjoyable read, i do hope that you plan on going on with it. You have left it at a spot were well i want to know what happens when Erestor confronts Lady Celebrian or if she comes to him with apologies. Keep up the good work and know that this story is still being read.
person selva
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
been wondering if you're still working on this story and was excited when i finally saw an update... yayyyy.....
please.....please.... finish the story, i'd love to know what the ending's gonna be like....
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a welcome! I can't wait to for the next chapter to find out what Elrond is going to do once he realize that his precious wife was the one behind his Advisor being taken from their home and the reason behind it as well. Celebrian had no right what so ever to do what she did. Then on top of that Erestor and Glorfindel is in a relationship, so how could she ever preceive him as a threat to her marriage? Crazy bitch.

Excellent work! Please update soon!

Nemesis ^_~
person Kalima
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you! You're back! I've been trying to keep my eyes out for your next post. Please do keep writing.
person Crye 4 Me
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Oh, Oh, Oh, Oh. Great story. Though in my opinion after the fight Erestor has given he did give it up a little fast. But Thats just my opinion. Not critisizing you or anything. I expecially liked the half buck naked Glorifindal, and the toss over the balcony. As I said GREAT story. Forgive me High on pain killers Broke a finger yesterday.
person elle
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is really good but your chapters are so frustratingly short.