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for Thawing the Ice

by Brenna

person SilverWolf
schedule June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hehehehe, it si good indeed. Thanks for reviewing my story!

I like yhe prize that Glorfindel wanted, and didn't get. Awww, I want them to kiss, and huggle and to make wild, passionate Elf sex.
person Ellie
schedule June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG!
This is getting better and better - I can just feel the tension building up
between them and I'm sitting here with a stupid grin on my face!
Rathering amusing, if not scary for people walking in and out the room! LOL!

GGREEATT Stuff! Ooh, sorry to hear about your work shifts!
I hope that everything works out smoothly for you!

Brilliant stuff! Cannot wait for more, I shall be patient however...for a bit hehe.

Wonderful, wonderful story!

~Ellie
person Lyna
schedule June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. My friend reccommended this story to me, now I see why!
I LOVE the character interplay going on here - it's just brilliantly done.
I can flick from one character's position to the other, like a tennis game - the
ball is constanflipflipping between Erestor and Glorfindel!

I love it. You have a gift for making dialogue GREAT to read and
you provide enough description to keep us happy and enable us to
picture a scene clearly without distracting from the key element of the moment.

This story has now got me hooked and I really hope that work settles out
for you so you can get back to writing the rest of it! It's such a joy to read and
I can see so many other people have read it just by looking at the number
of "hits" you have.
It's great and truly worthy of this review.

Once again, I LOVE the character interplay/dialogue and keep wanting
the chapters to go on forever! It's brilliant and now you've left me hanging! LOL!

I cannot wait for more! Beware! I'm going to be constantly checking back!! ^_^
Can't WAIT till the next chapter!

- Lyna xxxx
person Reze Clyne
schedule May 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is getting better and better ><
I love the way you write Glofindel and Erestor's little fight. It's kinda cute..hehe
Keep on writing. We are waiting for your new chapter~!!
person charlie
schedule May 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
waiting patiently for next chapter:)
person SilverWolf
schedule May 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Evil Glorfindel? Not evil, no, but wicked, yes, heheheh, please continue soon.
person SIlverWolf
schedule May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
lol, awww, I am beginning to fel sorry fo rpoor Erestor having Glorfindel dumped on him by Elrond of all people for breaking his arm....

Please continue and thanks for reviewing my stories....I know there are quite a few of them *sheepish grin*
person charlie
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yesss!!! another chapter cant wait for new one:)
person Paula
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please continue with this story. It's quite interesting so far. Keep up the good work. A job well done.
person Sheeijan
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Glorfindel has such a short-term memory. Not two minutes after worrying about what Erestor might do to him, he's teasing him mercilessly. *grin* I love it that Erestor is a Guardian, that's rather a neat little position. It seems that Glorfindel is going to entertain himself with driving Erestor insane with innuendo - hmm, will Erestor snap? Thanks for another part, I like reading this story.