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for Thawing the Ice

by Brenna

person Lyna
schedule June 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely bloody brilliant!
I loved this - this has been by far my favourite chapter!

You have done this wonderfully well!
I cannot WAIT - literally this time - for the next installment which I'm
sure shall put even this chapter to shame!

Brilliant, as always I enjoy reading your work thoroughly.
I am so grinning inside when I see Erestor's reaction to Glorfindel - whose
bold advances are just GREAT to read! So entertaining and most
wonderful!

Excellent work!

~Lyna
person Wolflady
schedule June 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good as usual. :)
Me want more nice chapters from you. :P
person Sawen
schedule June 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am so enjoying this story, I love the little twist you just put in, it would seem Glorfindel has competition, even if Erestor is more likely to kick them both...
person Sheeijan
schedule June 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, I for one am glad that Erestor's not going to cave too easily. I hope he makes Glorfindel run in circles. *evil grin* Not that I have anything against Glorfindel, I just don't think he should get his way too easily. Besides, Erestor has a lot of emotional baggage to get through first.

I did like the first kiss though, having said all that. *wink*
person Wolflady
schedule June 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*laughs* Yee, I'am sure Glorfindel likes it. :D
Please, post next chapter soon. I want it. :)
person Lyna
schedule June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wey hey! The most awaited chapter. *satisfied grin* Ah, just brilliant.
I was most happy to finally discover about this mystery elf who Erestor seems hell-bent on avoiding - asides from Glorfindel *wink* lol.

But...yet again...you have left me hanging at the parts that I just love
the most - the interaction between the Erestor and Glorfindel!
That is just evil, mellon-nin!

I cannot wait till your next update and shall keep checking back - as is my usual wont when I get my fill of your updated chapter!

Keep up the great work and the brilliant character interaction!

~Lyna
person charlie
schedule June 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
well done:)
i hope glorfindel doesn't let erestor escape!
person Reze Clyne
schedule June 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I *love* this story!!! >w< Glorfindel is so cute...and so slyly...and that's why I like him! hehe
Keep on writing, dear. ;)
person Lyna
schedule June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You leave angianging THERE?
I suppose I can forgive you, for the part with Erestor and Glorfindel darting about was just completely worth it!
I certainly hope to see more scenes like that between them - but, I must
wonder, why IS Erestor so cold to Glorfindel's advances?
And, just WHO is this visitor whom Erestor hoped never to see again??
Cruel, very cruel to leave me hanging *grin* ah well, I shall retain my
patience and check back for the next installment!
Wonderful chapter!
ps. I passed on your thanks to my friend and she was estatic to hear I had read your latest installment lol, I'll bet she cannot wait to get home from babysitting to read it herself ;)

Great work!

~Lyna
person Sailor Aurora
schedule June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hehehe, this I like. It got humor, tense electiricity between the two.. oh, and two pretty elf men... who could ask for more?

oh yeah, the next chapter! ;)