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Extremely long authors notes that are distracting in the format of the chapter. Too much playing with reviews and not enough commitment to the story.

It would be great if you could get rid of the surprises and the votes and guesses and just write the story.

This is good but there is one thing about it that disturbs me. When everybody dies why doesn't Aragorn even react, I mean all his friends, his foster father and his lover get brutally killed and he doesn't even bat an eyelash, what's up with that?

Nice to hear from you again :)
I think a preview at the end of a chapter is great, but please don't tease! You will drive me crazy if I read the review and the update took a very long time. But I can understand, writing a fic is difficult and draining your energy.
I hope you can make it with the story. I give you my full support ;)

Hi, I'm so glad that you finally update this fic. I thought you're gonna ditch it, I was soo worried. I wonder who the girl is. Has she made her appearance in previous chapters? I'm begging for a hint here :)

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE put the next chapter up soon! ^_^

This is the most original story i've read so far and i think it's amazing, i wish i could put my imagination into a story like that, sadly i can't get things down on paper very well.
I love the language you and your friends invented it flows so well with characters, i also love the way you desribe the city, i've got the image of the city in my head so clearly. God there is so much more i could put but i'll wait and see what the next chapter has in store.
I'll be looking for more of your work while i wait.

*+*KittyQ*+*

this is a fasinating story! Much diffrent than what I thought it would be, but in a good way. Please ue soe soon!

At least you shall have reviews this chapter!!!! ^_^ It's a good story and it definentally plays on a angle. It's nice and refreshing. keep up the good work. ~Pal

this chapter's great, but you'll have a lot of explaining in order, lol. I like your description of Legolas' family, it kinda lightening the mood. And about Ida, it's very sad actually to know her own end.

Wow, a very soon update he he he. Chapter 4 is soo sweet and sad, you made me wanna cry and I changed my mind about Etine, I thought she was a royal bitch but she turned out to be kind albeit stern, good for a queen.