rate_review Reviews

Great story.

Does this story mean that there is hope for us mere mortals? Might elves come through the space-time continuum and find us mortal women bindable? We can only dream. Thank you so much for your stories making my dreams better.

Are you going to do a sequel? I hope so! I love this series!

i really like this story and its predesessor. i especially liked how everything worked out but there were some parts that were just soo perfect. like how both humans got to become elves when they could have well died. then there was the fact that the guy gets to live in the modern world without any type of ID. oh well im a sucker for happy endings anywayz. great job on these two stories.

Ooooh! *cries* Please help Elda! *cries some more* This chapter was just wonderful! And I even liked Felicity for once. Wow. Am very curious to see how you deal with Rumil/Elda in the next chapter. I like what you've done to bring Haldir and Elisabeth together and escape from the bad guys. And their meeting in the hotel in the previous chapter was great, I hadn't seen it coming until just before then! Anyway I didn't mean to distract you from helping Elda. She's hurt! *cries*

Thank you for not letting me chew on my nails and everything else around me for too long, great story can't wait for the next update!!!!

I really want to like this, but I just can't your Elizabeth is such a damn wimp it's not even believeable....She is suppose to be an elf now, elves have a greater strenght and she can't stand up for her self.....her continueing good will toward Rowland is sickening, he's kidnapped her, tried to rape her, almost got her raped and shes worried about his injuries????

That was great! So when do get the continuation!!!!
Keep it up you're doing fantastic!

Oh I'm so happy! I came on hoping to find another chapter tonight and I did! I really hope Haldir catches up with Rowland and Elisabeth soon. Rowland is kind of turning nice...at least he's acting somewhat responsibly now, which is good. I think he'd be a good match for Felicity:) He'd love an attractive mate and she needs a man. Plus unless he's seriously reformed, he always struck me as kind of a "user" type and that would serve her right...he wouldn't leave if he had a warm bed and a place to lounge in, so she'd be stuck with him. Hahahaha!

Can Elda go back to Lorien with Haldir and Rumil and Elisabeth (this is of course presuming they eventually find each other and find the portal to take them back home)? I want her and Rumil to stay together but it breaks my heart to think of Rumil being separated from his brothers for eternity. Also there's that little elf/human problem again. Oh well...I'm sure you'll resolve things somehow, and I'm enjoying it every step of the way!

Oh, and I just wanted to say again: more Rumil = Wonderful! Yes to the Rumil love:)

Poor Haldir! Hurry up and get him his "mate"! I feel sorry for him. He was so close, yet so far away.
I'm so anxious to find out what happens. Then again, don't let him find her too soon...I'm enjoying the whole Haldir/Elisabeth thing, wouldn't want it to be over too soon : )

You're d a g a great job! I can't wait for your next update...

Michelle...