rate_review Reviews

Wow! I love your story, and I can not wait to read more. It is so suspencful(SP?) please do not keep me waiting long ^_^.

I really wish you would finish this.

Argh! Just as I am truly intrigued and want to read more, I run out of chapters. I can't stand it! Why do writers write this much and then stop? I almost always review and say I am enjoying it, so I hope you didn't stop because you didn't get enough feedback.

Please finish!

WHY WHY WHY STOP AT 3 CHAPS! MY this close *Holdin fingers a cenimeter apart* FROM SNAPPIN! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE,IF YOUR WAITING FOR MORE REVIEWS,HALF THE TIME YOU'LL ONLY GET RATINGS! SO FUCK WHATEVER IT IS(Unless if its REALLY important)! I AM GONNA GO MAD,I WANNA KNOW NOW PLZ! PLZ PLZ UPDATE! This is bloody brillant mate,For ONLY 3 CHAPS! LOTS of Fan LUV!:D POOR ELLDAN,GLOFINGEL,AND EXPECLY ERESTOR! *Doin Update Chant) If u don't know what that is it goes like this PLZ UPDAT UPDATE,PLZ UPDATE UPDATE! Its more of a song,UPDATE PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ! Lolz,But REALLY mate BLOODY FILPPING FANTASTIC WORK! People (Not author) DON'T STEAL MY SAYIN ITS IN COPYRIGHT ANYWAY!Lmao:D

Also to comment on this,Longer chaps! And I HATE CLIFFHANGERS! U don't ALWAYS have to put one in a chap! Also finish it before anyone loses interest,Cauz i've seen it happen before! Peace nice work mate!:D

cliff hangers are alright every now and again but u dont always have to end on one. chapters could be longer too. but an interesting story

You know, I love all your stories. They're intriguing, well written, and original. But will you ever truly finish one? Please, this story is interesting. Don't let it languish like the others, doomed never to be finished till one completely loses interest. And such short chapters. I'm sure you don't like to invest your time in a story that will forever be just a few chapters from being complete.

this is a great chapter. i think this is a great story anyway. i love the writing. very good. the story is well writen and i can't find any major (if any at all) grammer mistakes. pe ype you up date this story soon and often :-D

No, I demand you tell me what'd happened to Erestor.

You can't stop there...

Although I suppose cliffhangers pull in reviews... *grins and ducks*

Arrrrgggg, write more!! Must... have.. more.. ;)