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May 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i just had to compliment you on this story.
magnificent!
your writing style is fascinating and the storyline absolutely intriguing! I cannot await the next chapter ;)
magnificent!
your writing style is fascinating and the storyline absolutely intriguing! I cannot await the next chapter ;)
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May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
God! You're causing me so much anxiety! I hate those twins so much that I am boiling with rage! Please please please don't let them get with Legolas. Why does everybody in Imladris just let them abuse our poor elf like that?
And as for Erestor, he must have really been hurt in the past to have so many defenses. I can't wait to see some of them come down and for Legolas and him to get closer. Please update soon!
And as for Erestor, he must have really been hurt in the past to have so many defenses. I can't wait to see some of them come down and for Legolas and him to get closer. Please update soon!
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May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this. While writing my own Erestor/Legolas fic I've grown rather fond of this pairing. There are definitely too few of them. I plan to change that though. *g* I like where this is going. I also love the twins. Though your twion'on't seem exactly commendable... -_-; English is not your native tongue? You are doing very well then. ^_^ I can't wait to read more. Since you've already got the rest written, I hope that means quicker updates? *gives puppy dog eyes* XD
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May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful chapter, and it came so quickly too! I loved Erestor's and Legolas' conversation. Erestor is so intriguing... I'm beginning to appreciate the character even more. Yours is perfect. Keep up with the wonderful writing. I hope to read more soon. =)
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May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Is English your second language?
When Erestor says "I'll borrow you one of my robes" it should be "I'll lend you one of my robes."
Borrow as a verb is used in reference to the recipient. This is not a typical error of native speakers.
There are a couple similar confusions ("Legolas fell down his eyes") but overall very well done.
It goes without saying that you are doing an excellent job with the language if there are only such small things hinting at inexperience, and even those do not seriously hinder clarity.
When Erestor says "I'll borrow you one of my robes" it should be "I'll lend you one of my robes."
Borrow as a verb is used in reference to the recipient. This is not a typical error of native speakers.
There are a couple similar confusions ("Legolas fell down his eyes") but overall very well done.
It goes without saying that you are doing an excellent job with the language if there are only such small things hinting at inexperience, and even those do not seriously hinder clarity.
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May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More please...
I love the pairing, I hope to read the next chapter soon, please?
I still love what I read.
Keep up the great work that you are doing with your fic.
Sivan
I love the pairing, I hope to read the next chapter soon, please?
I still love what I read.
Keep up the great work that you are doing with your fic.
Sivan
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May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooooooohh! i absolutely love it! i love erestor, and i neeed more! please write more soon!
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May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Wow,I was wondering about your fic yesterday and now...wahhhhhhiii,two chapters!!!!Two new chapters!!!!Yeeeeee,I'm so happy!! *jumps on her bed scaring her cat* Cannot wait to read them!Unluckily they will have to wait for this evening for I'm being busy now,but....heheheeeee,I'll wait for the evening with GREAT pleasure!;)
I'll let you know what I think!
Cheers,
your Drea!
Wow,I was wondering about your fic yesterday and now...wahhhhhhiii,two chapters!!!!Two new chapters!!!!Yeeeeee,I'm so happy!! *jumps on her bed scaring her cat* Cannot wait to read them!Unluckily they will have to wait for this evening for I'm being busy now,but....heheheeeee,I'll wait for the evening with GREAT pleasure!;)
I'll let you know what I think!
Cheers,
your Drea!
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May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I wasn't disappointed!When my stepsister came to pay me a visit (I'm sick with fever,ughhhh >< ) she found me with stars in my eyes!Ya,your Erestor is FROZEN,and I mean it!But that's just too cool,wahhhhhhh,I've fallen in love with him now!!! ^_^' Pleeeeaaase,don't make poor myself beg for more chapters!! *already on her knees*
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May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was sooooooooo cute. you've got me really excited about this fic. please update soon.
katie_k
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