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person louise_oblique
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very sweet, so cute. wonderful. sorry short 5th atempt at review and really want to go to bed now, anyway wonderful story and arc, love this ss
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louise
person lego forever
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
How sweet of Elrohir to ask Bilbo in the middle of the night and I like that Legolas has a bit tempered in his moods. It's also good to see that the people who care for our golden prince has had their share of "inconvenience" for hake.ake. I rightly imagined that Legolas would become comelier and more beautiful with pregnanacy. Maybe he would have twin daughters who are as feisty as their parents. It's nic nice to see Elrohir's continued jealousy of other edhil. Oh, I'm loving every chapter of this series. I was afraid that due to some unfortunate reviews, you would be hesitant to post the next chapter. I was desperately waiting for this yesterday. Anyway, maybe we could have a little action or suspense what with some edhil salaciously looking at Legolas. Maybe'll 'll see Bregon again? ')))) Well, you know best. I just hope you post again soon. As I said, if anyone could pull this off and not suffer the quality of plot and writing, it would be you. I'm proving myself right. Thanks for selflessly sharing your talent with us.
person Cyane
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww...the blueberry pie scene was adorable. I could just picture the grumbly and sleeobbiobbits :-P
person Minuial Nuwing
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is precious...Bilbo baking a pie in the middle of the night! So sweet! I am really enjoying this end to your wonderful series.
person Buttercup
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sigh, to have a spouse like Elrohir... Another woful ful chapter, Eresse! Such humor and tenderness; you have the gift :o)
person Dark Angel
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
"Silence met this request. At length, Elrohir spoke. “Legolas, ‘tis the middle of the night,” the twin said in measured tones. “Surely you do not desire for me to go to Bilbo and rouse him from bed just to bake you a pie.” "

Ahhhh that was so funny! I just LOVE these last chapters!! It's all so funny and cute ! Please updtate soooonnnn :)
person magda
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Mpreg? I didn't see it coming. The warning in the first chapter got me stunned. I really wanted to stop reading not to spoil the pleasant memories of your previous stories but, as always *sigh*, my strong will turned out not to be as strong as I thought and curiosity got the better of me. And I certainly don't regret it now. It's as brilliant as the rest of the series. However, I admit I was slightly disappointed. After reading the warnning about mpreg I had this little wicked hope that it would be Elrohir. Oh, that would be amusing! But I guess you just can't have everything you want. Pity.
As I said the story is great. Keep up.
person eliza422
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think that Elrohir should get pregnant too - it would serve him right for doing this to poor Legolas!!!!
LOVE THIS STORY>>>ALL OF IT!!!!
person crimsonvioleteyes
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM

Oh this is absolutely hysterical. I admit a strange enjoyment from reading mpreg fics. *cackles* Perhaps due to having children of my own, I find perverse pleasure in reading how males might handle the pregnancy experience. Well written as always and very humorous as well. Thank you again for sharing your amazing writing skills.

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person Anita
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*bg*

That was very sweet :) And then I don't mean the pie (although that must have been good as well :) ) The big question has arised...will it be one or two littles?? And what will it be...an ellon or elleth?? And names!! Probably something with an 'E' at the beginning...that also runs in the family, just like twins.
Well, I am sure we will see soon enough! Keep writing and please, pay no attention to those people who are whinning about this part. It isn't my favorite part, I'll admit that, but I am willing to give it a go....and since I am still reading and reviewing it you can rest assure that I like it *g*