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for Disrupting Haldir's World

by Sinda

person MarzBar
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the wonderful Haldir love story, even if he was a blockhead. I will now go look for the sequel.
person Brey
schedule June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I thought that this was an extremely cute story. They made the perfect couple and I liked how you made the elves sexual beings without all the uptightness of 'not wanting to be with a human'. I personally perceive them as beings that as long as it’s beautiful and appeals to them, it’s worth their time in the sack. Thank you for your lovely story as it kept me awake all night reading it. But I'm glad I did. My sleep deprivation will be worth it tomorrow at work. I only had one thing that I was slightly curious about. Haldir's other brother didn't make as much of in impression in this story as I had thought that he would. It seemed like maybe they weren't as close as the Haldir and Rumil. That's the only thing I found a little odd. Otherwise it was bloody brilliant!
Ciao,
Brey Autumn
person shoogar
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awwww...! It's finished.Well, Sinda that was a lovely story. I enjoyed very much! Good work!
person Ann
schedule April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah,yes! A truly interesting, well written story. Your original characters have wonderful personalities.ove ove the conversations between Haldir and his brothers. Can't wait to read more. Thanks.