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for Longing for More

by kirameki

person Nora
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm...bring in the twins as competition for Legolas' affections (please do). I love your story. PLEASE update soon.
person SnakeMistress
schedule July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
as long as you do not make the twins really icky or anything. i think its a great idea. poor legolas. i hope everything turns out alright for him *sighs* this is a great story though and i'm enjoying it greatly. i hope you up date soon and i can enjoy more of this wonderful story.
person Jaylen
schedule June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just read your story and it has my interest. I would love it if you wrote some more!! The twin idea is just fine! They are always a welcome addition.
Jaylen
person Paula
schedule May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please continue wthisthis story. But leave the twins out of the picture. Just have Haldir and Legolas. if if you do bring them in have them just be acquaintances of his or friends not as old lovers or as enemies. Keep up the good work.
person magda
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm waiting eagerly for the next chapter. The Twins? Why not? Bring them on.
However, Twins or no Twins, write something soon. Your story got me really hooked.
Wait a moment, your story about Erestor got me hooked too. Well the evidence is clear then. You are a very very good writer.
person Sian
schedule May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think you hit it right on the money. Legolas must have been very strong to last out the sea longing. I'm not an expert at all on cannon, but if he was warned and then lasted until Aragon's death... I also like the idea of the twins being brought in. Looking forward to more!
person Brin
schedule May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More please and longer chapters too ;)
person Teri
schedule May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Of Course you should continue this story. I hope you are not just sitting there. Step on it and get those computer fingers moving. This is such a good story with a lot of different options for the direction you want to pursue. Bring in the twins or bring in Haldir's brothers or even some obnoxious, arrogant (more then Haldir) type, made up character to push Haldir to the edge. This could be a lot of fun for you and great reading for the rest of us.

Take Care,
Teri
person Minuial Nuwing
schedule May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter...you portrayed Haldir well. Please keep going! As you probably know, I like the twins- in nearly any flavor! They would make perfect old lovers...or new lovers, or male strippers, or beer salesmen,etc.

*By the way, 'P3-Beginning' made my husband blush a few times, too, which is quite a feat- so don't feel too lonely! I believe the next chapter of 'P3-Mirkwood' will be quite 'blushable' as well! (VBG)*
person nimue
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I sure liked it so far!

I don't think most slash readers are canon addicts; I think it's more important to write a good, conent ent tale than to be a slave to the multitude of facts that most are ignorant of anyway.

Do continue, I say...