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for KHILA AMIN

by Juliediane

person yue
schedule April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ohhhhhhh another story! another GREAT story in the making. i love it so far. poor girl. lost her daughter. it would be nice to put more about her background in later chapters cause i was getting a bit lost in the first chapter. update soon =P
person shoogar
schedule April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Me likes it very much girls! Wonderful story! Keep it up!
person katy
schedule April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
argh! now I'm hooked on TWO of your stories at the same time.
I like the two different styles of Elanors Revenge and Khila Amin.
And i just adore the way you write Haldir :)
HURRY, HURRY! Please update before i lose my mind!
person Nora
schedule April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!! First, I'm happy that Haldir didn't die at Helm's Deep (hated that about the movie). Second, I love your story's concept. And I can hardly wait to see if those two end up romantically linked. Great story!!!
person Misty
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
After reading Paths of Destiny, Elanor's Revenge, and your short story, Crescendo, I was totally blown away. I love your stories, and they're all delightful and amazing works. Now this new story has already got me hooked, even after just the first chapter. Haldir is a fascinating character, as are his brothers and all of the Elves. Thank you for bringing them to life in a way that is playful and humorous, while at the same time, both erotic and tasteful. I can't wait to read more! Cheers, and keep up the outstanding work! :)
person Larimar
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great beginning! So emotional, even for the first chapter. I am looking forward to reading where this is going.
person Mélusine
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am no 'amateur' to this fic, as you know perfectly well... but I couldn't resist, and post here a review to Khila Amin, probably my favourite, with Amarië... of all your fics.

I love and admire Keara so much... she always has been a true heroine to me, being both a fragile and strong woman, often doubting, of herself and not of others. She is such a wonderful person, someone who could be real and someone you seldom meet in fics and stories. How can it be ? She is but a human, and yet she may be far stronger than every Elf on Arda... who seems to grow pale in comparison ! It is so understandable Haldir fell in love with her. Keara is the one and only main character his his story, and I think it is us who had to follow her - into the very fire of Mordor !

It is pity I cannot talk French in review boards, because I would have told all that I think about her. About the story. About you. But you do know that already, don't you ?

Please go on writing, posting, and making us dream again and again. You are more than welcome.

Hannon le. Du fond du coeur, merci.