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for The Forgotten Ring

by Sienna

person ned
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just finished reading this great story. Bit of a worry that Haldir had to wait over 1000 years before he finally got his leg over, but apart from that, very good.

One question though, is there a Chapter missing between 36 and 38. One minute Haldir and elves watching Eridani killing orcs and driving them back towards the elves on the ground, with chapter ending with Haldir just about to face a large orc, the next chapter has Haldir and Eridani descending into the caves under the Palace apparently through a door in Ronihim's charmbers. Point is when did Haldir and Eridani meet up again and how did they find the door and realise the traitor was Ronihim. Sorry, I may be a bit slow, but did I miss something that everyone else got?????
person MarzBar
schedule March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for this fabulous adventure and romance. I am always happy when the beautiful Haldir finds a true love (even if it's not me).
person Cassandra
schedule December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just read this straight through and loved it. I am reading the Pentanath and For the Love of Maia and I am completely entranced. I love your writings. You have secured a fan!
person Sorynliv
schedule December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic story. Very creative, well written and well researched. Thank you for the pleasure of reading such a wonderful piece.
PS....it's nice to see some LOTR het....not to mention Haldir...yum ;-)
person Talasi
schedule November 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sienna,
This is absolutely wonderful! I can't believe I missed this story before. I have not yet caught up. I'ma bout halfway through, but I sincerely hope you update regularly. Stunning imagery!!!!

Talasi
person marcianightengale
schedule November 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sienna, I've checked back every day to see if you'd updated/finished this and your other wonderful stories. This one in particular, I love, but, no! I love them all!! Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful imagination. Looking forward to more Pentanath and For Love of a Maia and sorry you're work schedule has been so rough. You're a real trouper to have continued to write in the face of such adversity. I hope it gives you as much pleasure to write your stories as it gives your readers to read them. I've recommended them widely. Marcia
person Michelle
schedule November 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A fabulous story, Sienna. I've very much enjoyed reading about the trials and tribulations of Haldir and Eridani, and am very happy that, in the end, all turned out well. What a perfect ending for such a beautiful story. Thank you for sharing your story with us. I'll be looking forward to reading your updates for your other stories...keep up the good work, and thank you once again for doing such a fantastic job.

Michelle...
person Michelle
schedule October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Eridani and Haldir have finally gotten it right! YAY!!! I loved the chapter...it was hot, sexy, AND romantic. Loved it!

I cant wait to read more, so, update soon! :D

Mich... ...
person Michelle
schedule October 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What a great title for your latest chapter! Indeed, what would you say to someone after all that time. Obviously, regardless of the time that has gone by, these two are still unable/or unwilling to tell each other how they really . Th. Things never seem to go smoothly for these two. *sighs*

Apparently, my other reviews didn't post, so hopefully this one will go through! Keep posting and keep up the good work :D

person Allana
schedule September 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful. I can't wait for your next update.