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April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Same as my review on the yahoo site.Looking forward for more.
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April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your summary was not kidding about severe injuries. My stomach was churning from the violence in the story. Glad you did not add any more. Poor Ru Wo Wonder if he is even able to speak with his neck being cut like that.
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April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
:) A good start! I hope you continue writing.
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April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, no! Poor Rumil. Thank goodness Elladan and Elrohir showed up when they did! Very good start :o)
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April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH,this was good but soo sad.Please update fast.