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for Carpe Noctem.

by magoo

person merimom
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice job! The perfect "I need a short DomBilly fix right now" fic.
person angel
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cool story! pretty good for your first fic. can't wait to read some more! keep writing. :)
person Kendra
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I thought this was sweet, cute, and very hot. Great job!
person Nana
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Did you really think I wouldn't review...! Ha.
I love it. :)
person deathkiss
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like the story idea so far; my only advice would be to space out your paragraphs; it makes it much easier to read!
person magoo
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Changed it! Thank you for the feedback. :)