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for Pottymouth

by Oropher

person honeymufins
schedule June 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness - this is just the most wonderful surprise. I wasn't expecting to like this at all, but the image of legolas as a biker really pulled me in...and then i discovered what a truly entertaining and engaging story this is...plus the very welcome bonus of the hottest, wettest, most gorgeous sex in a fanfic EVER.
I love this story so much I printed it out and took it to bed with me...wasn't quite the same as having the pottymouth elf in there with me...but I takes what I can gets!
I am fanatically checking for updates everyday. MORE PLEASE! I am so impressed with how you never once lose the tone of your story, you never lose sight of their characters...and you even have a truly intriging plotline. GREAT WORK!
person Rozelle
schedule June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM


I loved this chapter. So many plot threads so deftly, descriptively and beguilingly spun! They range from Legolas' culinary skills, a quick dip into his nature loving Elvish heart, Gimil's lovelorness and finally automotove engineering. Your very deft handling of plot and characterizations continues to make this story a fascinating read. Thank you!
person deathskiss
schedule June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am SO in love with this story. The idea and character development is fucking brilliant. I cannot wait to read more. Update soon!
person Vi Janaway
schedule June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don't know how you keep this strai I I love the litle asides like the plant life.
You are doing consistently well.
person Wanderer
schedule June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was f()cking amazing. Girl power at it's best. LOVE IT!

more, please...like...yesterday?

person rozzan
schedule June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoo Hoo. You lucky shite Eowyn, I am so so jealous!
person kittynip9
schedule June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is absoluetly AWESOME! The story thus far has been amazing, but his chapter was just takes the cake so far. Thanks for embodying what all os us in shitty jobs have ever wanted to do if we ever had the chance.
person Wanderer
schedule May 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You write the most incredible sex scenes I've ever seen in fanficdom. I've been purposefully holding off on reading your updates, and OMG was it worth it! Thank thank thank you you you ! Impatient for more!
person Vi Janaway
schedule May 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HOW did you ever come up with this idea? You have managed to include a bit of everything. :) :) :) Still very funny and romantic...in spite of the language.
person Rozzan
schedule May 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Shit shit shit.... back later if I can recover!!!!!!