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July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading since the beginning and just realized I hadn't told you how much I love this story! I am almost completly a slash fan(I have yet to read a het story with my favorite elf that I liked until now) and have never enjoyed AU stories at all, but this one just sucked me in and now I am totally hooked. I check every day to see if you have updated. Anyway, just wanted to let you know how much I enjoy this story and I hope you keep writing!
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July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am completely blown away by your story as I hope you have gathered from my previous reviews. It makes me laugh uncontrollably, squirm with supressed orgasms, die of envy of Eowyn, and cry sometimes, so deeply, with the sadness of life.
I wanted to tell you that as a Christian (with lots of Pagan influences) your use of Legolas as selfless and sacrificial and Christlike strikes such an unebeleivable chord with me. Because I have always seen him like this, as fun, and the sexiest beingave ave ever encountered, but also as sacred.
It's just unbelievable what you have acheived here. I can't tell you just how much this story means to me and how important it is to me, for my well being... the incredible laughs it gives me, the longing and love it inspires, (suprisingly, so romantic given the langauge and hot sex descriptions, it still shines through, genius!) and the profound spiritual thoughts. This story should be on prescription for intelligent people needing to think and learn about life.
I wanted to tell you that as a Christian (with lots of Pagan influences) your use of Legolas as selfless and sacrificial and Christlike strikes such an unebeleivable chord with me. Because I have always seen him like this, as fun, and the sexiest beingave ave ever encountered, but also as sacred.
It's just unbelievable what you have acheived here. I can't tell you just how much this story means to me and how important it is to me, for my well being... the incredible laughs it gives me, the longing and love it inspires, (suprisingly, so romantic given the langauge and hot sex descriptions, it still shines through, genius!) and the profound spiritual thoughts. This story should be on prescription for intelligent people needing to think and learn about life.
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July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh Wow!!! I was still recovering from the shock when I read Ch 20. For some reason I thought Faramir was going to come back all contrite, begging forgiveness, and a huge showdown would ensue, so I was surprised.
But Ch 21. "FUCKING A!!" loved the descriptions of how they all behaved when drunk, just brilliant. Would have loved to have been there with them. And the stuff about the Valar and Legolas and the Physiological thing that Arwen explained. Just spn. Yn. You've really GOT this Elf pinned down haven't you? Liked how you said it was Yavanna set that up too. She is my favorite.
Sending you a an e mail on the religious stuff here, really moves me!! Sacredness and sex combined...Oh YES. The Elf personified.
And the sex!! Ok I'm speechless yet again.
But Ch 21. "FUCKING A!!" loved the descriptions of how they all behaved when drunk, just brilliant. Would have loved to have been there with them. And the stuff about the Valar and Legolas and the Physiological thing that Arwen explained. Just spn. Yn. You've really GOT this Elf pinned down haven't you? Liked how you said it was Yavanna set that up too. She is my favorite.
Sending you a an e mail on the religious stuff here, really moves me!! Sacredness and sex combined...Oh YES. The Elf personified.
And the sex!! Ok I'm speechless yet again.
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July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful, sweet, damn sexy and everything else I could ask of a good story. Though I pity the bed on their wedding night...
But you have to tell us what happened to Fairy-meer. That ****ing son of a ******!!n'tn't just get away! If nothing else, let Pippin dump him in a bar with a certain sign around the neck...
But you have to tell us what happened to Fairy-meer. That ****ing son of a ******!!n'tn't just get away! If nothing else, let Pippin dump him in a bar with a certain sign around the neck...
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July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh Thank God. I can't tell you just how relieved I am to read Ch 19. the Elf restored as he should be. I am still sobbing uncontrolla But But now I am no longer prostrate with grief on the floor eyes unseeing. (Like another reviewer I feel you must have had harrowing personal experience.) I am now bouncing up and down in my chair almost on the edge, sobbing uncontrollably with relief and joy. I cannot begin to tell you what you have done to me with this story. I am so hooked it is beyond beleif, so into it, it's scary. So much investment in your characterisations, your hot sex. This must be the best thing I have ever read. The best romance, the very best interaction between characters and all in the space of a couple of days. The intenseness of the lovers, both Eowyn and Legolas really, really strikes a chord with me!!!! You GOT IT!
The mix of everday life, hot sex, profound religion, all mixed up together, as indeed it is in our minds is brilliant. And the way you have portrayed it with romance and longing and so much heart rending, human humour just kills me. This is truly a masterpiece.
The mix of everday life, hot sex, profound religion, all mixed up together, as indeed it is in our minds is brilliant. And the way you have portrayed it with romance and longing and so much heart rending, human humour just kills me. This is truly a masterpiece.
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July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ch.19 Well from crying uncontrollably with grief you now have me bouncing up and down on my chair, whooping and crying from happiness. That was SO SO good. And another little cliffie to finish. hee hee, can't wait. I bet I know who this is at the door!
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July 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you brought him back h'ray h'ray h'ray I think murder at this point would be justified.
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July 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Jesus.....
I'll post a better review with the next chapter(s). Right now i'm at a loss for words.
I'll post a better review with the next chapter(s). Right now i'm at a loss for words.
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July 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
His heartbeat....OH THANK FUCKING CHRIST!!!!!
You evil evil evil evil woman!!!
HOW could you do it to us???? WHY did you do it to us????
I've not been so emotionally involved in a story since I read 'The King's Property part 2' and sunk into a deep deep depression when it was all over and happily ever after seemed to be AWOL.
I had to keestiesting my head on the desk so i wouldn't hyperventilat and become hysterical, as I read the chapter with Eowyn in the bedroom...and I was shouting (really I was) at the monitor when Legsy was reaching for the staff, hoping I could change his mind. I still can't believe you did it.
and I don't really understand WHY you did it...so I really agree with Rainien...
1) WHY did he have to die in the first place??
2) What the hell happened to that rat bastard Faramir???
Answers better be forthcoming or you may have a riot on your hands!
btw - I love you and your story and hope it keeps going for a long time. Your imagination is a place I would love to play in for a while...do you think we could arange some sort of play date?
You evil evil evil evil woman!!!
HOW could you do it to us???? WHY did you do it to us????
I've not been so emotionally involved in a story since I read 'The King's Property part 2' and sunk into a deep deep depression when it was all over and happily ever after seemed to be AWOL.
I had to keestiesting my head on the desk so i wouldn't hyperventilat and become hysterical, as I read the chapter with Eowyn in the bedroom...and I was shouting (really I was) at the monitor when Legsy was reaching for the staff, hoping I could change his mind. I still can't believe you did it.
and I don't really understand WHY you did it...so I really agree with Rainien...
1) WHY did he have to die in the first place??
2) What the hell happened to that rat bastard Faramir???
Answers better be forthcoming or you may have a riot on your hands!
btw - I love you and your story and hope it keeps going for a long time. Your imagination is a place I would love to play in for a while...do you think we could arange some sort of play date?
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July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh shit, You utter swine! You knew you were going to do this all along didn't you? You are not a mortal author. You are one of the Valar!
I have been sobbing , screaming, crying. Had to go out in the middle of CH 17. How I drove my car, I dont know. The tears were still pouring down my face.
I fucking hate You!!! Fuck Fuck Fuck Shit Shit Shit!!! You cow! How could you do this to me!!! And yet I am laughing through my tears at the genius that is yours. You bloody knew you witch. You knew what this would do to us!!
I writhed with Eowyn on those cold tiles. Oh Shit!! You co I h I have now read Ch 18 and Ok, I am a little calmer but not much. The tears are still streaming, the snot dripping off the end of my nose. My heart beating like a train. Fuck Fuck! This is just the best thing. Oh Valar! Legolas!! O Give me strength. You fucking bitch!!! You've changed my life forever with this story! I love you you bitch!
I have been sobbing , screaming, crying. Had to go out in the middle of CH 17. How I drove my car, I dont know. The tears were still pouring down my face.
I fucking hate You!!! Fuck Fuck Fuck Shit Shit Shit!!! You cow! How could you do this to me!!! And yet I am laughing through my tears at the genius that is yours. You bloody knew you witch. You knew what this would do to us!!
I writhed with Eowyn on those cold tiles. Oh Shit!! You co I h I have now read Ch 18 and Ok, I am a little calmer but not much. The tears are still streaming, the snot dripping off the end of my nose. My heart beating like a train. Fuck Fuck! This is just the best thing. Oh Valar! Legolas!! O Give me strength. You fucking bitch!!! You've changed my life forever with this story! I love you you bitch!