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I LUV IT!! it was so sad when Celeborn did that to Legolas, and then Leggy does it to Rumil...I cried*sniffle* please post again soon

Hehe.... I have something a little different in mind. But yes, It will be angsty. At least in the beginning.

Thanks for the story!! I really really think you should write a sequel, after the War, in which Leggy and Rumil reunite. There could be lots of fun angst - like old lovers assuming Rumil's still available, and some combination of Leggy, Rumil, or Haldir chasing them off. And I'd LOVE to see Legolas whip out some princely power (being son of Thranduil, and friend to Elessar, king of men and Celeborn's grandson-in-law) to get back at Celeborn. Surely he could teach him a lesson SOMEHOW. For example, Celeborn ends up moving to Mirkwood after the war and naming it East Lorien (or something like thatght?ght?) - maybe Leggy could keep him from being allowed to do that w/o some sort of written appology or public humiliation or something. Hehe.

First of all, thanks for the reviews..

The next part of the story will go more in depth into Celeborn's character... so if you had some questions, hopefull they'll be answered there

This is a good Lotr fic, no doubt about it. I just felt it lacked a bit of depth into Celeborn's character. Why was he so violent during sex? Why did he have sex with other elves instead of bedding his rightful wife? Why did Galadriel accept it? Why did she not stop him when she visibly knew he abused his sex partners? While I understand this is a Rumil/Legolas fic, there is a certain lack of information. For instance, was it normal for an elven lord to ask various servants to his bed and for them not to have a say in it? If so, these conquests upon returning home sd had have given some indication as to their abuIf HIf Haldir knew, so might have others. Why was there not an uprising?

I liked your fic and I'm going to read Abused, but I found it too short and telegraphic. It's fine if you only want to write a pieace of Leggy slash but for it to actually have an emotional impact, it would be worth a re-writing. Just my opinion, feel free to take it or discard it.

Great chapters.

I can't wait to read the next part.

I still love what I read, as I enjoyed read it, thank you.

You did a terc woc work with your fic.

Sivan

I liked it. It would be impossible to answer every question anyone may have and its unecessary to go into the philosophy of why people cheat.
Keep up the good work, I look forward to the next part....

That was unexpected, and wonderful chapter as well.

I still love what I read, as hope to read more, as more is needed.

Keep up the great work that you are doing with your fic, it is adorable.

Sivan

More please... soon?

Nice couple chapters.

Poor Legolas lost it because he didn't listen.

I love what I read, please update soon.

Keep up the great work that you are doing with your fic.

Sivan