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for A Breath of Fate

by kris8011

person Phairesse
schedule September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love the way you have woven history into fhis tale. I would really like to have Elladan truly be in love with her. Even if she had to return to Valinor without him for the time being, they could look forward to the time when they would be together.
person Phairesse
schedule August 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a very interesting story. ouldould love to se her with Elladan...but her dark elf may not be either brother. I never thought about Arwen having visions. But it is plausible.
person Phairesse
schedule April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is a good beginning sad undertones but i like the history