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PLEASE WRITE MORE
PLEASE

Thank you for the update! I'm happy that Nianna chose to go with the Fellowship and look forward to reading her adventures with the others.

It would be very nice and helpful to put this in your header:
"SERIOUSLY AU- BEARS LITTLE TO NO RESEMBLANCE TO ANYTHING TOLKIEN HAS EVER WRITTEN! BE WARNED!"

Very entertaining and exciting AU tale. Hope you will continue so we can see what happens to Nianna.

I agree. Nothing like a Mary Sue to help a day of fun....not. I wrote a story like this when I was in fifth grade when I first saw the films. FIFTH GRADE. I was like 10 or 11 at the time and I wrote something like this. How many times have I read fanfics that had a 10 walker? It wouldn't go right with the original Tolkien story. You have the potential to be a writer, but this story here just doesn't do it. Not a flame, just an opinion.

woooooohhhh... man that last part really stunned me. in a good way!!!! i really like that u had nianna introduce lego-butt as her HUSBAND!!!! @o@ i mean how many ppl have done that? this is such a breath of fresh air, in a way. i love ur idea so don't worry. this is a great chapter by the way. deffinitely lived up to my expectations. i mean i loved everything about this chapter. i loved how she was glaring at gandalf and that he's just sitting there eating slowly...well slowly for a hobbit but apparently quick for an elf... and taking his time. lol. i problably would have popped into ur fic and smacked him over the head for nianna!!! lol. i also like ur whole dawarf conversation with the heroine and aragorn. i'm a bit sad that the men werent in this chapter much but u have to save some stuff to write about for the next chapter right?!!?! it was funny though. i was reading that u had everyone in the rivendell now in this chap but i was like wat about the guys from gondor, and i had to read over the chapter to find that they were there. lol sorry. it was just so brief that it slipped my mind. i hope u update soon!!!

u updated but its sooo short!!! sigh. i hope u get another chapter up soon.

Im really loving this story , love the character of Nianna - strong, humorous, caring. If you do get flamed for leaving Arwen and Glorfindel out then take no notice , there is a reason its called FANfic - you get to decide what and who to write, if people dont like it they dont have to read it right ? Really enjoying the relationship and banter between Nianna and Estel, intriuged to see how that progresses. Also dying for Nianna's man to get here , it is Legolas isnt it ? Anyway enough babble please write more soon.

*rolls eyes*

Gotta love the self-insert, Mary-Sue, completely *non* canon fics...

NOT.

Very nice first chapter. I am intrigued with Nianna's mission. Where is she going and why, what is the urgency? I can't wait for the next chapter. Hurry please.
Take Care,
Teri