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Well, kiddo, you did it again. The beginning of every chapter to the end of every chapter keeps me holding my breath. Your writing is like riding a rollercoaster of gentle to fearsome over and over and it doesn't let anyone off the ride. I need oxygen. I almost thought Lisse might lose her baby and I'm scared to death for Orophin. I was stunned by the deaths of the elves from the waves. I certainly did not see that coming. Haldir must find that old buzzard and (this is my anger talking) kill his miserable butt. I can't believe Lisse's grandfather would have killed her and the baby just to get at Haldir. What a rotten s.o.b. I wish so much that Lisse and Haldir had been able to have their baby in Haldir's talan. They were so happy. I need more rollercoaster. I need more chapters. SOOOOOON! Please!!!!!
Love this story. Love you for writing it.
Take Care,
Teri :):):)

I just read the new part and it was great. Frankly, I was very creeped-out by Eadendir. The palantir is turning him to such evil. I panicked when I thought you might kill off Haldir. I hope Haldir and Orophin get completely away before Eadendir can get to them.

Oh, WOW, was I stupified to find out Eadendir was stealing from Odomir and creating his little treasure trove. That is just the same as stealing from Min and Lisse. That is contemptible.

Your story and your writing are great as always.

Take Care,
Teri

the plot thickens, hahaha!
gosh, I KNEW this Eadendir was a nasty bastard!
This story rocks mucho mucho! I admit I'm dying of curiosity about the new Elves. Are they Avari? ex-Orcs? Or totally new? (which I would find curious as they were not really mentioned in Illuvatar's song)

Hey there, so glad you posted the new part. I take it back...I am ecstatic that you posted the new part. Good Lord, I still can't get over your writing style. It is just superior. I was so happy that Lisse got her head straightened out about Haldir and I'm just as happy that Niel gets to see Orophin again. Its about time Haldir explained his "mistress" to Lisse. This business about the palantir is very unnerving. I feel like Lisse's grandfather is becoming the cause of the darkness' coming and that he will unleash something terrible in Aman and more importantly, I feel he will use it against Haldir and maybe Orophin. There is also the worry that Varda will ask Haldir to fight this darkness. This story is so intriguing and so many different things can happen. Please keep writing. I come home from work everyday to see if you have posted.
Take Care,
Teri

I'm so curious about these new Elves! Are they Elves who were once Orcs, or something like that?
And what about the presence in the House of Elms, very very creepy!
I love the mystery and the atmosphere, please update soon!

I finally had the chance to catch up with this
Most interesting. I hope they stay together

uh oh!
boy, they're cute, but incredibly thick! but it does make angst, lovely lovely angst!
Could we have soon another description or a travel in the Blessed Realm? I really love your atmospheres. And some action too! Fluff is nice, but, ah, adventure! that's the thing! I want to know more bout those strange new Elves!

Wow! What a chapter! I need to go take a cold shower!

Holy! Holy! Holy! Heading for a long cold shower. :):):)
Take Care,
Teri

I love your story, it's really well written and intriguing, and I love your vision of the Blessed Realm. So all not's perfect in paradise, hmm? These Elves are quite human I think, though they would probably hate to hear that.
And about Haldir and Lisse: WELL IT'S ABOUT BLOODY TIME! *mumbles: stupid, over-complicated Elves*