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person kirameki
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm back!!!!!!!!!! It was lovely! I absolutely loved how you handled the rebirth and lil' Elrohir was simply too adorable. Especially how he cleaved to Legolas immediately. It's so hard to picture a chaste Elrohir. ^_^ And Legolas had it even more difficult. And all those nasty elves trying to break Legolas' bond and get between the sheets of either one or the other. Sheesh. Some of those people acted as bad as Men. I had always been confused as to whether the hobbits and dwarf did eventually die in the undying lands or not. I love how you handled everything. I was literally crying my eyes out at several parts. I 't wait ait for the next chapter. About how many are left?
person dinah47
schedule April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Alright, you've got them back together again - FINALLY. Where are you going to take us now. I know, have read the other 28 that this is not the end of the story. Something else is going to happen, somewhere, sometime. It's a good thing that I send bunch lots to my "guys" or they would kill me.

Actually, that last scene was one of your best. I just loved Elrohir's telling Legolas about their binding. And to think it was what he wore that triggered the memory. Just think, if he had worn that outfit earlier, he could have saved both of them a lot of grief.

Looking forward to where else you take us. If I remember right their are 30 "stories". The guys are only on #5. They had the books sentthemthem so that the ones that were only "movie" version knowledgeable would be able to follow. Also the 1st Sergeant is making all of the read Silmarillion for historical background. They only have their "discussion" group once a week - they can read after everything is ready for patrol the next day. Don't figure too much is read as they are dead tired. Have had my son dose off talking on the phone. Told you, you writod fod fiction.
person Teri
schedule April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WeeeeeeeHoooooooo! God love ya, baby. Thank you for a most incredible chapter. This has been one heck of a roller coaster ride and more than worth it. This 'old dog' needs to learn new tricks...like patience. :):):) I love your writing.
Take Care,
Teri
schedule April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
At last! This was truly wonderful! It happened so suddenly I can to scroll back a few paragraphs onvionvince myself it was actually happening! I loved the end with their mother's tucking them in, very sweet!

Tux
person Kimia
schedule April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely bloody brilliant!
person magda
schedule April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, finally.
person Talasi
schedule April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
At last!....................... Silly Author, you made me cry. *wipes tears* I am beyond relieved that this torthas has finally ended; however, this means you are closer to the end of the story....which I am not at all happy about. I sincerely hope you write more after this. You certainly have a devote following. As I said before, this amazing story is most worthy of Tolkien's amazing characters, world, and history. You have a gift.

Talasi
person Somali
schedule April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* Finally! *grins* Well, Legolas's waiting have not been in vain. Afterall he did re-gain his beloved elf knight. Poor Elrohir must be really sore after his repeated 'claimings' by Legolas *hentai grins* I'm really happy that they have finally come together. Thanks!
person Andúnë
schedule April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sobs with joy*
person Dark Angel
schedule April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*screams* OH FINALLYYYY!!!! I am sooo happy and at the same time I can't stop sobbing!!!! I never expected this when I started this chapter!! THANK YOUU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D!