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person Viewer
schedule April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
No fury like a woman scorned?
person Jasmine
schedule April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yikes!
person lego forever
schedule April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I feel like Legolas and Elrohir are about to be ensnared. Thank goodness there are some allies present like Elladan, Nimeithel and Gimli. How exciting but also scary!!! Another masterpiece, Eresse you are such a loremaster!
person louise_oblique
schedule April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
"She did not yet realize the lengths to which she would go to achieve such a dream or the depths she would descend to fulfill it."

Scary but absolutly excellent, briliant chapters, well wrutten sex scenes

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louise
person louise_oblique
schedule April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
super and so very sweet ;)

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louise
person Rainien
schedule April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was lovely. All this sweetness and happiness...something bad and full of angst is bound to happen. LOL Can't wait!
person Anita
schedule April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hahahaha!!! Melthoron and Haldorn, another ellon! What a wonderfull twist in your tale! I must congratulate you on that :)

Other than the above, this chapter feels sad to me, it feels the same as the end of the appendix LotR, all of the fellowship have either died of have left for Valinor...it make me feel melancholic (hope I spelled that right), you know. And it is a clear reminder that this serie will soon end!
Ah well, you know the saying 'All good things, must come to an end'...but that does not mean I have to like it! Keep writing and we'll see what the rest of part 29 has in store.
person lego forever
schedule April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What a lovely prelude to the angst coming. At least you are laying the context of how strong their bond iich ich I think will be severely tested and tried in the next coming chapters. But nevertheless will prevail, thanks for your early assurance :)))) I am afraid of gilwen and her potions -- as I said before, I think she will use them and all other means to get Elrohir and maybe get rid of legolas??? No!!!!!!!!!!!
person Mel
schedule April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think the "hardest and most bitter test of all" for Legolas will be Aragorn's death. I think "she" will try to get Elrohir, but of course he would never let her come between them. I also suspect that there is a little Elrohir-ett running around, and we all know how he feels about elflings.
I don't ever want this to end!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love this story (and the frequent updates)
person Jasmine
schedule April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely loving your writing, as always. But where's the angst that the beginning and the summary have promised?!

I know, I know, I must be patient. But it's so hard!!! :)

I can't stand to think what I'll do when com complete the series - do you have any plans, which might forestall the despaire of your fans?