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person leggylover
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
sory!new poem i made up after reading Greenleaf and imladris 29 Apr. 11th, 2004 @ 11:16 am
I weep as i think of you,
I wish you were just sleeping.
I weep as I think of you,
think of what we've lost.
I weep as I think of you,
you're promise to hold on,we will meet again.
I weep as I think of you,
I try to fall not to despair,
I weep as I think of you,
As I wait for your return,
I laugh as we meet again,
As I feel your lips on mine,
I cry out as I feel you,
As you fill me with your love,
I feel as I'm with you,
Safe in my arms again you are just sleeping,
We are now at journey's end,
I love you with all my heart.
we are safe now,
We will be toge til till the end of time.
person leggylover
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i hate my comp. i hope you like it!
person greenp4lm
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Glad you brought him back and soon too. I don't think I can take the angst if you're doing otherwise. How's grumpy Gimli doing? Was he dwelling in the mountains or somewhere close to Legolas? Dwarf in a wood? Update soon please.
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Happy tears this time Eresse! Elrohir is returned - thank goodness. And not before time it seems. I love the fact that Legolas is so self-depreciating when it comes to his beauty, I can quite believe many would desire him for that alone. Elrohir will *not* be pleased if he discovered how much distress such unwarranted attention has caused Legolas. Now we get to enjoy watching Elrohir grow up, which should be very interesting to say the least!

As always, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Marie :-)
person Dark Angel
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well Eresse you've brought me to tears yet again! This time they were tears of joy , I am so glad that Elrohir is back!!! I can hardly wait for the next chapter! And I really don't want this fic to end :(... it's definately the best of them all!
person Anita
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Now I am crying again! This is just so wonderfull! The moment that is was said that Celebrian was pregnant I was like 'that's Elrohir!! How soon!'
Really an incredible chapter *sighs happily with a goofy grin on her face*
person crimsonvioleteyes
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful. This ongoing story never ceases to amaze me. The way you describe Legolas waiting faithfully for his Elrohir to return is absolutely incredible. I know this whole series is coming to a close. I will be sad to see it end. Your writing is exquisite and so richly detailed. Thank you for sharing your talents with us.

take care--

cve
person lilith
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAAhhhh my Gooooood !!! I hate it when I cry while reading fics !!! But I'm willing to forgive you 'case you brought Elrohir back :D But why do I get the feeling, that there will be more angst ahead ?
person Kym
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excuse while I sit here impatiently hitting the reload button. :) Loved this series from the beginning, and still loving it now.
person Aelin-uial
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I wish you'd stop making me cry! I'm running out of tissues and the shops are shut over Easter.
How slowly are you planning to take Elrohir's growth? It would be possible to write a whole series about his childhood and adolescence, and then finally his coming of age and returning memories of Legolas and his previous li As As always, this is such a pleasure to read and I look forward to the next part.