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September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought the story was quite beautiful, the ending almost made me cry. Please keep writing. 10/10, Mouse xx
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April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Don't worry, that what I'd suspected, because he seemed to happy. But some readers, like myself, are afraid of overanalyzing the story and putting incorrect meaning into the story. Very nice. If you ever want a beta, drop me a line.
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April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awww.. *tear* Why didn't he just use the contact infomation from her writings that he had sent, or whatever it was that he had managed to invite her over in the first place. *cry tear cry* that's so sad.
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April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, I like It It is an interesting ending though; it doesn't tie the story up with a bow, we have to draw some of our own conclusions. While that is anereseresting technique, some readers (like myself) dont trust their own judgement. Does he go and find her after this? Does he try for a relationship with her? Thats what I got, but I don't trust myself. Need more coffee.
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April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww... it's so good. she's soo y.
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on an off subject, viggo is on the cover of the this months GQ magizine.
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on an off subject, viggo is on the cover of the this months GQ magizine.
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April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. Iris is so real and Viggo very good describe. I wait the next chapter with impatience and at the same time, I don't because it's pratically the end. Excuse for my english, I am a french reader ^_^
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April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Please keep writing because I want to know if there is a happy end. I hope so and Iris deserves it.
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April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was a really beautiful story, very nice. You write better than a lot of americans, so don't worry. You skills are great, you are an excellent writer. I only noticed a few tense issues and a couple missing words. Very nice. Is this is? Will there be more? I know it was a one night thing, but I think Iris and Viggo should end up together. Like, she's at home in wherever she lives, and he calls her. You know, an indication of a slowly building relationship. But very nice, I loved it.
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April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AS always, another beautiful chapter. Thank You.
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April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, I really like it.