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October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey dear! So glad to see you've updated! Made me so sad, can't wait for more!
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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love this story. Can't wait to read how Orli deals with actually realizing that Viggo is not dead. And how the two will deal with their "friends". your story has really captured me, and i cant wait to read more of it.
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September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
And you'd better hurry 'cause I'm a little angry these days... Sorcery is always available...
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August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay you updated, please update again soon.
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November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Its good to see another chapter............ but your writing still does not seem to be betaed and some of the facts around Orli's arrest and jailing are nonsensical.
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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please do not take so ling to write the next chapter poor orli
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July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Its a good story - its just that the English is a little too stilited
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July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lovely update....I want some more
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July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think the story is great, though the grammar makes it a little more difficult to enjoy. Perhaps you could see if someone would be willing to beta your work so that it is a bit more coherent. Other than that, I'm looking forward to the next update...thanks!
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July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, your chapters are too short, they don't make sense, it seems to take forever for you to actually finish a story... if you actually have ever finished a story, and your subject matter is usually either sexually violent or silly.