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April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God....that was so beautiful...
I was reading every line with a held breath - so potent, so beautiful!
Very sad though :( Which twin was it though? In faou pou probably mentioned but I was so
hung up on the emotions and the flow that I lost sight of the name - for some reason I thought
it was Elladan who had died - but hey, I'm probably wrong! lol.
That certainly was beautiful! Again i use that word!
You could FEEL the grief and sense the utter frustration - so well written!
Lovely!
Another installment would be great, but you could leave it as is if you wish. But I'd love to read some
more LOTR work from you! So I'm off to have a snoop and see what else you've written!
Keeping writing!
Great stuff!!
~Seriah
I was reading every line with a held breath - so potent, so beautiful!
Very sad though :( Which twin was it though? In faou pou probably mentioned but I was so
hung up on the emotions and the flow that I lost sight of the name - for some reason I thought
it was Elladan who had died - but hey, I'm probably wrong! lol.
That certainly was beautiful! Again i use that word!
You could FEEL the grief and sense the utter frustration - so well written!
Lovely!
Another installment would be great, but you could leave it as is if you wish. But I'd love to read some
more LOTR work from you! So I'm off to have a snoop and see what else you've written!
Keeping writing!
Great stuff!!
~Seriah
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March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
How sad!