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April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful story... I love the detail that you have put into describing the growing relationship between the twins and Legolas. I very much look forward to your next chapter :o)
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April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful story... I love the detail that you have put into describing the growing relationship between the twins and Legolas. I very much look forward to your next chapter :o)
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April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Omygosh! That was so sad! Poor Elladan, I want to huggle him! Aiya, that was painful. Though I can understand why Legolas would need time to sort out his feelings. It's not everyday that your best friends (twins no less) tell you they BOTH love you. I do hope they all make up in the next chapter... Which I hope you won't make us wait long for. Not after a cliffie like that. ^_~ Oh, and I like the endearment the twins have given Legolas. It's sweet. ^_^ So was how the twins braided their beads into his hair. So cute. ^_^
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April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
First off, I would like to thank you for reviewing my own story. ^_^ It made me happy.
Now, onto the actual review. I must say this was a totally awesome chapter. I loved how they gave Legolas the gift of seeing them together, when they never let anyone before him do so. And how you portrayed it was just so beautiful. I also love how in the last chapter you made legolas particularly assertive and commanding during their love making. Too often he's portrayed as the submissive type. ^_^ It was also quite original. I don't think I've seen that before in a fanfiction w/ Legolas and the twins. Hmmm... And as for the 'talk' the next day, well I can't wait. ^_^ Me wants more. Eh heh. I just love Legolas & the twins. SO much fun. Heh heh. SO I look forward to your next update (as always :).
Now, onto the actual review. I must say this was a totally awesome chapter. I loved how they gave Legolas the gift of seeing them together, when they never let anyone before him do so. And how you portrayed it was just so beautiful. I also love how in the last chapter you made legolas particularly assertive and commanding during their love making. Too often he's portrayed as the submissive type. ^_^ It was also quite original. I don't think I've seen that before in a fanfiction w/ Legolas and the twins. Hmmm... And as for the 'talk' the next day, well I can't wait. ^_^ Me wants more. Eh heh. I just love Legolas & the twins. SO much fun. Heh heh. SO I look forward to your next update (as always :).
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April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow!
This just keeps getting better and better!
Keep up the GREAT WORK mellon-nin!!
Can't wait for more! *bits finger nails in anticipation*
-Elie
xxx
This just keeps getting better and better!
Keep up the GREAT WORK mellon-nin!!
Can't wait for more! *bits finger nails in anticipation*
-Elie
xxx
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April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Mmmmm.... that was tasty! Really cool how you described the twins fusing - surprised me quite effectively.
I can't wait for the talk - please update soon!! :)
I can't wait for the talk - please update soon!! :)
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April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another delightfully delicious interlude. I loved how you used the conversation from the first interlude to correspond with the events of the second. Now I'm hungry for some cinamon buns with honey... wait a minute, what am I saying, I don't even know what they taste like! ^_^ Ah, well, does it even matter? Nope, not really. Actually, I'd much rather have Legolas and the Twins. Wonder where I can find me some of those? ^_~
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April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, I'm glad that Elladan managed to get his turn at the honey butter without the interruption of distracting side dishes. Fair is fair, after all. You've managed to push off the talk, which is killing me. Guess I'll have to mollify myself with all the hot, steamy, sweaty action you've got going on. However will I cope? *evil grin*
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April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! *fans herself* phew. Talk about hot elfin'in'. I hope you don't make us wait for the rest. And 'Las' answer had better be a "yes". ^_^ You certainly have made my day. ^_^ I loved how you got Elrond in on their games before he realized he'd better shut up because they weren't talking about food. *snicker* I was cracking up in my school's computer lab. I hope no one thinks I'm unhinged. But then again I do read and write so much about the twins... maybe they rubbed off on my. And of course, there's wise old Glorfindel. I wonder if he suspected, or was saying it out of the fact that he trully didn't want to know. Hmm... Once again you've given me a delicious chapter to sink my teeth on. And I needed one, I don't get any food, I'm just a poor college student. -_-;
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April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is great... The gift was cute... I cant wait to see what happens next