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for To Be Claimed

by bluegold

person Dawn2009
schedule June 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD
person hi
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bad author! Don't stop NOW1!!! PLEASE update soon!
person Alatariel
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update this story........if the story has been abandoned please remove from site...wish you would finish it...it is really good...
person lynn
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is funny!!!

i would love to read the rest....

lynn.
person kirameki
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lol, I'm really enjoying this. Poor unsuspecting, innocent Legolas. And when he asks what lustfulm means, oh that was simply priceless. I do hope you continue it, and soon. I eagerly await your next update.
person Aeryn
schedule March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*chuckles* Highly amusing. I thank the Goddess that my parents did not shelter me so... As it is, I kinda wish they had, if I had turned out like your Legolas I'd probably be better off (ie actually accepting getting some -- as it is, I'm just screwed up in the head). Anyway! This is really cute! I cannot wait to read on. Though I do have hopes that Legolas will mature and will not sound so much like a toddler as the story progresses. As it is, it is HARD to read him experiencing anything sexual with the twins. And they treat him like a toddler... it kinda comes too close to pediphilia (or some deranged form of lust for a helplessly retarded teen) for my mind. I have to keep telling myself that he's old enough, he's not some elfling who has not come upon his majoirty. But like I said, it's cute!


Aeryn
person Buttercup :o)
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Legolas is so sweet (and slightly nieve) and the twins are just wicked.