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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love gay sex
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November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was sooo gay
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January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have a question....chapter 2 you left the comment:
(Author’s Notes: It has come to my attention that I should clarify things by stating that eventually Lord Elrond and the elves from Rivendell will be making an appearance in this story. I just have to get through much of the backstory before that can happen. Please be patient!)
The never did show up....don't get me wrong, I enjoyed you story. thanks for sharing.
June
(Author’s Notes: It has come to my attention that I should clarify things by stating that eventually Lord Elrond and the elves from Rivendell will be making an appearance in this story. I just have to get through much of the backstory before that can happen. Please be patient!)
The never did show up....don't get me wrong, I enjoyed you story. thanks for sharing.
June
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August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor little elf! He'll never feel safe or free again! And just WHAT(!) did Wess do to bring them there?
More please! :D
More please! :D
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July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this fic. It is very good but there are two things that confused me and I hope that you can clearify them. In chapter 12 when you introduce Laurilyn you state that she is an only child; "Upon his deathbed he granted the care of Taelin to his only child", but later in the chapter you state that she has a sister; "I would feed you whilst my sister runs to town", which is it. The other thing that confused me was the description of Taelin's eye color in chapter 13. All the way up until chapter 12 Taelin's eyes are stated as being blue; "surprised at the sudden opening of crystal blue eyes" (ch 12), but in chapter thirteen with Taelin's encounter with the Gondorian his eyes are described as being green; "Taelin swallowed turning frightened green eyes". I was wondering if you can give me a little clearity about these incongrueties. Please keep writting like I said before I am immensely enjoying this fic of yours. It is very creative and original. Please continue the good work and update soon.
Zani
Zani
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June 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Did his original master keep records. There must be some kind of book that recorded where his children were sold.
Such a grim, unhappy, dreary existence. and the master and his cronies were never punished.
Don't let it all be a further crueltyet het his freedom be for real.
Such a grim, unhappy, dreary existence. and the master and his cronies were never punished.
Don't let it all be a further crueltyet het his freedom be for real.
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June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!! What an EXCELLENT Story!!! It is outstanding!!! Please continue with the next chapter!!! I hope Taelin's torment is SO to be over!!! I can hardly wait!!! I Love It!!! Thank You!!!
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May 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nothing bad will hn ton to Daela right...right?!
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May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story, very well written. Can't wait to see what happens to poor Taelin, I wonder if he'll ever be free. Can't wait for the next chapter, good luck! :)
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May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aw...poor Taelin. Please continue I want to know what's gonna happen