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Rozzan, what can I say? I love it. You keep me wanting more. Your character descriptions are great and I can just shut my eyes and see it all happening. Also, thanks for your help with my own story. Love Ya, Red

“Gods! Legolas.” I hear Aragorn’s voice in the darkness. “You managed to keep quiet tonight, but did you know you made the very ground shake! Can we get some sleep now at last?”
I thought I was going to laugh my arse off. You might want to take a look at my "Of Quarrels anmen\men" and "Mornie a Estel" on Fanfiction.net. I did something similar. I love how you have done this. You do need to separate the quotations from the paragraphs, though. And some of the dialog is run together. General semantics type of thing. But as ever I love your story.
Ithilin

Hi Rozzan, it's me...just finished reading Chapter 7 and what can I say...I know I keep repeating myself but I do love this story. Beautiful, evocative and enchanting, it has a touch of sadness, desperation, yet it's uplifting and filled with hope. Your words capture everything perfectly, like this“Ano“Anor is Sindarin for the sun, that is you, red and gold and warm and burning. Ithil is the moon, that is me, mysterious and cool.”

It is just perfect! There is magic in your words, and I'll never tire of reading your writing. Now that you've started I demand :-) that you never quit! It would be a tragedy!

And Legolas explaining about being a stranger amongst the fellowship and would have felt worse without Aragorn is pure genius!

Oh my God and the section with Ro's bird...her letting it go and the unspoken message as to why she is, had me in tears! Wow, your words move me so much, Rozzan!

And theu nou not only make me cry but leaving me laughing at the end! You have such a great talent. I personally feel a great story is born from a writer who has the ability to capture the scenery without boring, which you do perfectly, to make one feel what the characters are feeling, which your writing does and to envoke strong emotions, like sadness, joy, arousal, and happiness, which you do with your writing. Just keeps getting better and better and better!

I love this story so much. My heart actually aches when reading it, because it really is that beautiful!

Angel

BRILLIANT NEW CHAPTER!! (7)
...I'm feeling a bit weak kneed after that 'ground shaking' finale!

Oh wow sooooooooooooooo romantic
poor Aragorn :)

Please, continue your story. It's so sweet and romantic. I have read some fics about Legolas, you your fiction is the most beautiful. And It was so good to make it from two sides of view. Great! Interesting, will he bind her in future or it has already happened? Your aealleally good writer. May be, because your alredy said some words about Eomer, you will write a fiction with a romance about him. But please, please, don't bring Lothiriel in your story (if you will decide to write:-)), i just hate her, i din't know why, but I thing she is not a good match for Eomer!
Anyway, the romance between Legolas and Rowannen is a perfect idea. I hope their love will grow stronger. Thanks alot for a good scene of love too.

Whew!!!! This story is amazing! I can't begin to say how impressed I am that your language is so gorgeous and poetic and at the same time you wrote some of the best, leave-me-breathless steamy scenes I've read. I can hardly wait for the next update!!!

Hehehehehehe! Oh yeah! That was a REALLY good ride. I want him to do that to me! Your descriptions are overwhelmingly beautiful and erotic. I found myself pushed over the edge. I wish I could write my scenes like that.
Ithilin

I love the intimacy that you have built here. I just could not stop reading. Your descriptions are so vivid and beautiful even writing in first person(my personal bane as it is difficult for me to really get the entire picture across). I have enjoyed reading this story I hope you continue and bitter-sweet endings are always fun to read. Happily ever after doesn't alway have to happen even in romantic fiction. I can't wait to see where you take this. I will be putting this on my rec read list. You are very talanted don't ever let anyone tell you otherwise.
Ithilin

U R KILLIN ME HERE! I love the way that this is written, my compliments to you. Very flowing and romantic..keep it up and give us Chapter 5...PLEASE!!!!
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