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Wow! That is one of the most beautiful love scenes I've ever read!

Um........... You have rendered me speachless over the last two chapters. I was in tears. And I keep asking myself how will this end? You have crafted such raw emotion in your story I just don't seem to have the words to express mine. Yeah I know odd for a writer to say something like that but it's . C. Chapter 6 of "Anira" is up, would love to hear from you.
Ithilin

You have taken the main story line and nicely put your own spin on it
a successful melding
I am sad about her brother.

Rozzan this latest chapter simply blew me away. You've really managed to do what many writers attempt but few few actually achieve; write beautifully erotic intimate scenes that are full of love and passion and not just smut;) Really wonderfully written chapter! I can't wait to read more:):)

-Chris

Rozzan, this is so achingly beautiful it leaves me at something of a loss for words. It is so loving and sensual and just gorgeous. My heart hurt when I read it. It is wonderful to see her stepping up to take care of him and seeing more of her strength whcih we know she has, its just been somewhat eclipsed by his experience up until now. And I love the line about his back arching as he would string his bow. God, that's good. Long, deep sigh.

Rozzan, I just love this chapter - there is so much here that is WONDERFUL. I love the language lessons. If I were going t learnElvish, I'd start with I desire you and I love you too!

Herons are an interesting choice - Do you know they mate for loife? It's a tradition in some native American nations to give a heron feather as a wedding present. In ase you an use that....

I love the line about feeling the music in her body, since they have to be quiet and can't make any noise. It's the sensuality in the scene that makes it so sexuallly charged. Does that make sense to you? Keep inspiring me, my friend....

Whew - there is all of life in this chapter, a binding of two hears, death, the birth of a baby. It is all here. I lvoe that it reminds us what a hyusical world this is. Women give birth where they have to , everyone fights when they have to, it is all about doing what needs to be done. Morwen reunited with her chldren is so powerful for me. As a mother, the scene where she sends them off to be safe just about killed me.

My very famovirte moment in the chaper, is Legolas drawing from the tree, like the tree from the earth. It was perfect.

I really love this story, please keep updating. It is coming along very well, i can't wait to rest the rest of it!

Rozzan,

Yet another beautiful chapter! This time wraught with tension and drama and danger as the warg's attack! Love this pulsing between the beautiful explanation of the Eldar and Edain through to Legolas' and Rowannen's pledging to each other, witnessed by Aragorn and Eowyn! This is incredibly well done! Then the threat of the Warg attack, combined with the pregnancy and birth. Powerful stuff, so much happening, creating create tension and drama that is fast-paced and ever moving. Left me feeling anxious, thank goodness I know Legolas will return or I'd be having a slight heart attack about now.

As ever you amaze me with your wonderful ability to capture emotion and scenery in such a magical way.

Love it, and as always await the next chapter with pleasure.

Angel

Incredible! Phenomenal! Fantastic! Wow! Okay, I think I am out of the appropriate adjectives to use for your story. All I will say now is, More, please!

Doreen