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- - I'm quite saddened by this fic. It disgusted me beyond belief. I nearly puked when I read it. It's so fucking unrealistic, even for Lord of the Rings. But forget the plot-my biggest concern is your grammar and spelling. COMMAS ARE YOUR FRIENDS! Please, by GOD use them. Your characters have no personalities to speak of; this is the largest Mary-Sue convention I've ever seen in a fanfic. It'siculiculous. It's ludicrous, and furthermore, it's just bad. It's so horrible that I was on the verge of gouging my eyes out during the first 3 paragraphs. Why are you people lying to her telling her this is good? It's tasteless, and nearly plotless. There's nothing going on here but sex, sex, and more sex. Just because someone writes a ton of lemons and laces semi-pretty phrases together doesn't make something good. If anything it shows the author's complete lack of imagination. Furthermore I was mortified by the way you displayed the Elves, like they're the whores of Middleearth, as if they have no morals to speak of. Lacing your own sexual fantasies and ideals of the way the world should be into such a beautiful realm makes it look like shit on white Egyptian cotton. While I respect the fact that it's your right to write so poorly, you must respect the fact that I have the right to voice my opinion on your poor writing. I mean, that's why you put it here on AFF.net right? To get people's opinions on it? Well not everyone is a garbage picker. I'm sorry I waded through this pile of rubble; I was hoping that it'd get better. Guess I got my hopes up for nothing.

I'd lie to you, but I'd be doing you a disservice, because it's just bad. Stop writing immediately. Do not ask why. Go home now. You have no one to blame but yourself. I feel sorry for your muse-all the torture you must put them through just to get this garbage out of the trashcan and post it on the net for unsuspecting victims to fall prey to.

MY GOD WOMAN! WHERE ARE YOUR COMMAS!?

This fic is only good for bulemic people: it's a puke-fest just waiting to happen.

Excellent chapter. I can tell the %*^$ is going to hit the fan (obviously) but the plot is getting deep... update soon! Thanks for writing.

I have been reading this story for a while. I was happy to see that you updated and that you plan to update more often.
This story is awsome! I love the realationships you have made with the charaters. I will be checking daily for the next update.

I really appreciate that you have kept the characters IN character...This is very good.

oh...just so gorgeous..love the riding in the rain..can feel the sleet ...and the coming back to frienship with Eowyn..it is painful those two apart though..something carved out of them both
as ever the detail is everything...beautiful

Hey, Rozzan! I am so glad to see this inuiinuing...and the twins are still there! **grin**

Excellent chapter- very exciting- and I'm looking forward to the next!

**hugs**
Min ;)

Will you ever update this as I am dying for the rest!

Why aren't you updating this? This is a fantastic legomance! I am chacking weekly and since I found this story a month ago you haven't updated once. Please don't abandon this! *begs on knees* :(

More please ... and soon! It's a fabulous story and it's been far too long since the last update. Not criticising, just encouraging you.

Cheers

Ellen