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March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is getting better. Very romantic and promise of a lovely relationship
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March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Not another cliffie! Goodness, i'm breathless in anticipation...keep writing! I can't wait to see Legolas, you know.. :)
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March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes it was very romantic! Are you planning on making this an extremely long story with lots of sex and a happy ending?????
(please, please)
(please, please)
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March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it was veryveryvery romantic
Nice and honest
Nice and honest
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March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story, you know your LotR! I haven't read many fics set in Rohan, so that is pretty original. I like that you write both his and her point of views. Please continue with the romance! :)
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March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Rebecca, Thanks so much for your suggestion. I looked and you are so right. I do run on a bit don't I? I have split the longer paragraphs into shorter sections and started new lines for new speakers, both in what I had already uploaded and the new chapter posted. Let me know if it is any better/easier to read. Thanks for your help.
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March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
sigh , that was very romantic :)
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March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story would be a lot more readable if you were to practice the fine art of using paragraphs and separate lines for quotations. It's REALLY difficult to read an entire page of solid text, especially when you have different people speaking within that paragraph. Try it.
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March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is different...i like your characterization of Legolas
You a g a good story :)
You a g a good story :)
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March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I like this story, definately better for waitwait!!!
(there's just not enough romantic het.. fe. featuring legolas)
please draw it out....and update SOON!!! :)
(there's just not enough romantic het.. fe. featuring legolas)
please draw it out....and update SOON!!! :)