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by Aithilin

person Celesta Hellewise Harman
schedule March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, You've got me hooked on this one now! Do update soon ne? It sounds like quite an intersting idea. Thank you much! Namarie!

~Celesta Hellewise Harman
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schedule March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well first I want the elf who tried to poison the king and accidentally got the prince to be turned into orc food. If you have orcs in your AU. Jus think what would have happened if it had been the king.
So they will send him to Elrond with Haldir there also. I hope Haldir will be nice to the little prince. You have made Lorien's inhabitants sound not very nice.
This starts out in a very interesting way. I hope to enjoy more. giggle
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schedule March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I liked the first glimpses we got of Elrond, Glorfindel and Erestor. I was glad that a rogue elf did the bad poisoning deed and not all of Lorien agreed. I was sad the Thranduil was/is missing Legolas' childhood. The elves really cherish childhood and I hate that in your story his father doesn't get that privilege.
Didn't get too much of a feel for Haldir so I will look forward to more in your upcoming chapters. Having Haldir teaching Legolas how to be an archer sounds interesting. giggle