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January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh, i WISH i could be there when they find out!
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September 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was GREAT! Hot smutty sex and the overshadowing of the truth eventually coming out -- are you going to continue this? I hope so! I'd love to witness the looks on their faces when they figure it out.
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July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Do I play anything? Sure. I play characters. I play dumb. I
play you, Elijah thinks.
This line for some reason I really liek...Not sure why, maybe my inner manipulative bitch going ooh yay....
I love this story!! though I would be interested in another either chapter or sequel.... Especially for the scene where these two meet again. Either way it works.
~BlackCat9~
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March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The ending was quite funny. You should add to this! I loved it! Very sexy and funny. Well done. ^_~
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February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I love the way the POV alternates throughout. Naughty boys.. awkward times ahead for them. Lol.
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January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Holy frickin Joe! This is quite possibly the best ironic story I've ever read.
And the mental image of Dom in Lij's underwear? So. Hot.
So.Very.Hot.
I love the fact that they're both playing each other, never thinking... Aaaaah. Amazing stuff. Just frickin dandy. I love it!
And the mental image of Dom in Lij's underwear? So. Hot.
So.Very.Hot.
I love the fact that they're both playing each other, never thinking... Aaaaah. Amazing stuff. Just frickin dandy. I love it!
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December 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Woo, OMG. That is totally sexy. Love the Elijah and love the Dominic. Warm and fuzzies I am happily accepting. And I'm very jealous. Your writing style is simply devine. Cannot wait for more. Kudos, hun!
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May 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow, probably the hottest I've read yet! Brilliant, thank you =D
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April 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ohh...I liiiike this! It took me like a minute to figure it out...(hey it's like 3 in the morning), but I got it.. LOL.
Cheers! (~.*)
Merry
Cheers! (~.*)
Merry
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March 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Jesus, what a tease! It's genius: Erotic. Witty. I love it. I love it!