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person Kanefire
schedule July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So Elrohir isn't as perfect a mate as he looked from the rest of your stories so far. But that was some making up he did, I would love to get my hands on those pictures. Poor Legolas the two that looked the most innocent turned out to be the most "wicked". I fell apart at the last sentence: Legolas not being able to ride for three days afterwards. *snicker*
person louise_oblique
schedule March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
"It was nigh three days before Legolas was deemed fit to go riding again."

he he he he *giggles* just absolutly perfect he he he he he he. really really really love this series :) uggsuggs
louise
person kirameki
schedule March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awww, so it was Elrohirs turn to hurt Legolas! I felt so sad when we found out how he'd been neglecting his archer. *sniffle* Although boy did he make it up. I was seriously blushing myself when I read all he did. Who could not forgive when assaulted with such a gesture of forgiveness. Although I would like to see those drawings. *blush* For educational purposes, yeah that's it_^. _^. I though it was so funny, the two Legolas thought were the safest were actually two of the most erotic. Well, they were all erotic, but you know what I mean. ^_~ Making up is half the fun as they say. ^_^
person Norah
schedule March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm so grateful that there are still stories in this series to come. It's beautifully written and excellently characterized and very hot.
person seelenspiel
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
brilliant! perfect! wonderful idea!

so even elrohir does make some mistakes sometimes! but i must say he's quite creative with his make up... *g*

it's great that you update so regularly!

Love it and can't wait for another story!!
person Kirui
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
::wicked snicker:: Very fun installment~ :D Such a little pervert is our Elrohir. yes... ::nods emphatically:: And that last line deeming Legolas capable of riding only three days after Elrohir's "penance".... XD Aa~~~ funness.
person Christiane
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your storylines are great but I really preferred it when Elrohir was *not* the dominant lover all the time. That's not a cry for an all-bottom Elrohir but it really annoys me that Legolas seems to be portrayed as the submissive lover all the time. It does not agree with the vision I got from him when reading the books.

When I read "Double Trouble", does that mean we get Elrohir and Legolas to babysit Elladan's twins? Oh..the fun of it!!

Of all your stories so far, I loved "To have and to hold" most, probably because it involved so many details about the first age and Gondolin...probably because "Tuor and the Fall of Gondolin" belongs to my favorite Silmarillion-stories. I have to thank you for that! Such a great plot, first Elrohir's and Legolas' troubles and how you wove them into the upcoming threat namely Maeglin.
person Lysan
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YES!! I love logging on and seeing another section of this saga waiting for me! I have to admit, it's nice to see hir hir being the one to screw up once in a while. I felt sorry for poor Legolas always feeling the fault. Can't wait for the next installment.
person jamie
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was wicked!!! Would love to get my hands on those sketches... *grinz*

I think I'm the only one who feels this.... but STUPID ARAGORN! Can't he bloody rule on his own? Heehee...

Great story again!
person Anita
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha!! Wonderfull, I loved it really :) And then your dry note at the end about Legolas not being able to ride for three days *bg* Looking forward to the next part.