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for Wound Tighter Than A Watch Spring

by Sal

person BlackCat9
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So far fabulous! I won't gush about how I love your style of writing because you know that already...
Fantabulous
~BlackCat9~
person Mrs Silmarwen
schedule April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aaarrrrggggghhhhhh! More!

Just one little point of critisism about the first chapter: one in German is "Eins", not "Ein". [/hair-splitting]
person noviceangel
schedule March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
gah! write more write more write moire. lovin it so far and give it a happy ending just 4 me pleeeaassseee
person Kendra
schedule March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think you've captured Dom's 'voice' quite well.
person Wheee!!!
schedule March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That is so bloody fucking funny!!! LOL *loves it* write more! Please?
person Anon
schedule March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just a question girl, what the fuck is an Mancunian? If you tried to write his last name it's Monaghan, or even Monaughan some say but Mancunian? What the fuck is that?
person Sal
schedule March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Re: person who asked so politely what a Mancunian is. A Mancunian is a word pertaining to a native of Manchester. Not anything to do with Dom's surname at all.