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for A daydream coming true ?

by ElvenLover

person iamvirgo
schedule February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
No no no. This is just sick!!!!
person damp³amp
schedule May 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Beside the spelling and gramatical errors it was pretty good up until the fifth chapter when we had a sudden female charater change. The story being with Samatha and then it became Heather. The story is alright but a bit played out. The met have sex and get married and a kid...I mean it is good but played out.