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for Two Too Much to Handle?

by Shanastay

person Tal
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*waves hands in air and jumps up and down* I'm in the disclaimer. he he

Smouldering elfsmut, tender endearments, and the promise of more than a physical completion.........*drool.....swoon....THUD*

Tal: *eyes elf curled up in the chair reading a book.......evil grin* Oh, Erestor.....come here please. We need to try something.
Erestor: *arches eyebrow* Has Shana been at it again?
Tal: uh huh! She was really good this time! Can you purrrrrr, E? *translates most recent chapter into 1 elf instead of 2.*

You realize that E wants to try out nearly everything. You need to do an Elf Kamma Sutra instruction book....with pictures of course. *off to test the latest elfsmut acrobatics with E*

Tal
person dawnenab
schedule April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Once again. I am fully caught up. I love it. I like the extra plot. Smut is good too. I will trust your expertise here in fitting this in with all the other tendrils of this ongoing adventure.

Keep it coming please! More More More!

~Ali
person Gin
schedule March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I always enjoy everything you write :) Cant wait for some more
person Tal
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You know I love you, right? (he he) Love the latest chappie of this story. It is wonderful elf smut, but you have also woven in an interesting potential plot. Rarely have I come across twins smut that leaves me deserving of my mafia name. I can honestly say that is a new position I haven't read before, standing up DP. I love elves!!

Wanton Elfbanger
person Rainien
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Do not even THINK of holding out on me, Shana. You know how much I'm enjoying this. You know the twins are my favorite Elves. They fuel my fantasies, and you're only adding to it with this story. And I like the idea of a plot. *S* Smut is all well and good, but add a plot to the mix and things just get better. So, yes, by all means, plot away!!
person dee dee
schedule March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
why why why did you have to stop there!!?? i never read a story with the twins and i have to say that this is very hottt and arousing. keep going PLEASE
person rashida
schedule March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Too hot to stop! Too hot to stop! Don't stop!...please!
person AzureDragoness
schedule March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Long night..... heh. Heh. Hehhhhhh *doofy grin*
person Serenityblack2000
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn! Leaving it at that *mumbles under breath* should have known better by the title!
should have just waited *slaps forehead* for more. Now how do I ease my frustration??

YO Dan, Ro, Come on guys.

SEE YA

SB
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*drooling much more* yay!!!!! I'm glad I chose this one for you to update today!!!
Very pleased, ye are are.
Here's a pizookie! *hands it over*