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for Two Too Much to Handle?

by Shanastay

person Your Worshipfulness
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really liked your story. I'm normally not really into reading stories with threesomes, but you didn't make it sound weird at all. Usually there's this kinky/subjugated feeling about the fics with multiple partner sex, but there was something really respectful about your scene. Please post soon.
~Your Worshipfulness
person Miriellar
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hell yeah! Wow, Ususally, when people write something like this it's just about the sex, but there's something else to it in this fic, I can't put my finger on it but I'm loving it!
person bubba
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
m.. twin action... I’m so jealous
person Miss Independent3
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hehe, kinky...lol plot bunnies, eh? can't wait. I loved the 'lithe jungle cats' comment. that really fits them.
person GraceTace
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ack...so good. Can't wait for more of your plot bunnies...
I love it.
person gayagwath
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was great..i hope you write more chapters in nea neatherther.
person Medli
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Omigoodness, please hurry with the next chappie! LOL
person sweetazzhoney
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is good, cant wait to see more
person sapphire_gurl11
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*blinks* Wow. That was hot! This story suddenly inspired me to write an Elladan-OC-Elrohir love triangle...
person isildur\'sbane123
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ok itoffiofficial: you're one hell of a writer. This is one of the most original smut fanfics i've ever read! And about giving it plot, I would say Aye because there is at least one loyal fan who wants to know what happens the the trio "gets it on" please update! Pretty please?