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for In Darkness and In Doubt

by ElvenDemagogue

schedule June 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hi. I really like this story, but as it seems that you have more or less abandonned it, would you mind. At all if I wrote and uploaded a story with a similar premise, and plot, but that is still somewhat different?
person Viviana
schedule August 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just finished reading part 7. I absolutely love this story. I love angsty Boromir. I do hope that she will give in to him sooner or later. Please write more.
person Beth
schedule June 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I do so *love* a good saga.

I think I like this sttoo too much for to be healthy. Damnit.
person Rangerº¨ a
schedule May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*lol* Of course, we will continue to review, silly! ;) And given the time, all those shy lurkers will come out of their little hobbit holes as well, just you wait! :)

That was a GREAT chapter. I really like where you are going with this story. To now have them all in one party provides such wonderful tension and opportunity, that was a very clever move as far as the storyline is concerned. Everything is possible now and I hope you put this to good use and that you will not finish this story too soon. You can practically feel them all sig ong on a bomb right now. Great work, keep it up and a big hug from "Old Europe" as always! ;)
person Beth
schedule May 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your stories. So very much.

What makes this one better, in my opinion, than Persuasion even, is the promise of a long, drawn-out plot, with plenty of opportunities for Legolas to alternate between b goo good and evil on the journey to destroy the ring. Looking forward to reading it.
person Rangdy²¨dy
schedule May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*grins* I knew you would update if I just kept jelling at your "partner in crime" long enough. Glad to see you updated and the story is taking an interesting turn! I knew Pippin had a role to play in this. Keep up the good work and sorry for the short review, but I am practically out of the door. Take care and greetings from Europe!
person Mari
schedule May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More..more...more! Please!
person Elven
schedule May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, Anon, by your capitalization and proper grammar skills I can really tell how valuable your opinion is. ;) Thanks for trying.
person Anon
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i only read the first chapter, or so i tried, but it's just very long-winded and well....pretty crappy written as well
person Char
schedule May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story! What an interesting play on who is good and who is eveil. Keep it coming.