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Whoa... hot... *fans self and shudders*

I'm really happy to see another Aragorn/Arwen fic. There aren't many here. Great job.

This is pretty good. The only quibble I have is that Aragorn would have to be superhuman to get an erection so soon after coming into her mouth, and the point of LotR is that he is ONLY human. Maybe it would work better if you saved his climax for after he'd enterer. er. There is also a bit of colloquailism in there such as

<< She captured them with her mouth, hungrily kissing him like she'd been wanting to do for ages>>

which slightly spoils the rest of the prose (which is very good by the way.) But all in all a very nice, romantic het story.

Chances are that's exactly what happened that night. ;) Beautiful fanfic. :)