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for Fear and Desire

by Mimine

person Tristian
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AMAZING!!! Please write another one!!! You have such a way with words.... you HAVE to feel sorry for Grima. I like the idea of writing it in Eomer's POV, because he is my fav character. Ive always liked grima as well, so PLZ write another one
person Lidra
schedule October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great one, I bow before you. Yet another flawless fic you've delivered. I liked the way you showed Grima's POV, the way he's disgusted with himself, devoid of human contact. Write more please!
person MistressAli
schedule September 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I read this on here once before, and thought it was excellent, but for whatever reason, didn't leave a review. However, I thought about it again today, came back, and read it once more, and I still think it's great! I love your style of writing, it's quite intimiate and beautiful in like...a rugged way. If that makes sense ;) Anyway, I also like how it featured Grima, since he's an interesting character that dosen't get much exposure (no pun intended LOL) Yay for writing about the underappreciated guys! ^^

Anyway, great job!
person Julia
schedule July 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very good, very IC, very sad. I think Grimas turn from Eowyn to Eomer is very convincing, and his perception of sex - something which is used to manipulate or humilate - is perfectly in character. So is the sweet little thought about Eomer's intellect (giggles evilly).
person Lord Alexander
schedule March 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I keep forgetting to review this, but I must say that your characterisation of Grima is wonderful. I love the way you make the reader empathise with him even though he remains a rather repellant character. This is my favourite Grimafic that I've ever read, love, and it's such a pleause to see such excellent writing in the LotR fandom
person Java Green
schedule March 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think you did a wonderful job of this story and portrayed Grima very well. Thank you for it.
person Kreija
schedule March 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you really have a way with words. Very consistent in style. Nice angle. Well done!
person c_st@email.com
schedule February 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! So full of atmosphere, suspense, depth and darkness. I hope there is still another chapter. Thanks for sharing.
schedule January 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Liked this very much.. Dark, and disturbing.. Remembering he has a mouthful of sharp teeth! ~shudder~ and I'll say it again..re* re* Eomer... :) ~grin~ Thanks for sharing! ~*~
person Java Green
schedule January 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I enjoy seeing stories that give Grima a bit of depth and not make him purely evil. I think he's not all bad but misguided and desperate. And Eomer/Grima is an interesting pair to see. I don't see too many Grima fictions out there and I'm always happy to find one that looks farther into him than his lies.