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for Second Born

by Khylea

person Headnut69
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM

Loved it please write more of C/F. I like story's like this.
person twodiffsocks
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MORE!!!!!!!! Loved it.....what happens next, AFTER TROTK?
person Melissa
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was wonderful. It took me a while to read it cause everyone was interupting me. But I really like it.
person Anon
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey this is pretty good
person Siarra
schedule January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is such a wonderful fic.

It is very beautifully written and it has that delicate warmth without being overly sweet. It's also nice poor Faramir treated in such a lovely way. I admit that the pairing seemed a bit odd to me at first but after reading it thoroughly and giving it some thought, it wouldn't have been anywhere near as good any other way.

This story is one to be remembered and held dear.
person kalima
schedule November 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, I liked this. Very nicely done. We are so sorry for Faramir in the movie (he doesn't have such a bad time in the book) that it does me good to see him have a really good time. Sweet -- I like it especially because you touch upon Faramir's soul and have Celeborn healing him. An interesting twist: where does Faramir get what self-worth he has? Celeborn! Unique idea.

Celeborn says something about being "weary" of Boromir because he senses his weakness. I think you mean "wary."

This site mangles the text of all the stories every so many paragraphs. I guess I don't need to point them out. Minor -- I can usually tell what is meant.

Effective erotic touch you have, too. Thanks.
person Mary
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful! Just beautiful! Your writing is excellent, and the pairing, though odd, worked wonderfully well!
person DMitchell1985
schedule April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story. You did an excellent job describing everything going on in the scene, as usual. I liked the spin you put on Celeborn. As with all of your work, I am much happier reading it. Are you going to be posting a new story soon?

Danielle