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February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh yea an update and man that was um intense. Jeesz the love and passion from them literally sizzled off the uh computer lol. I hope you write a sequel cause curious to see how they deal with there problems and if there love is strong enough to help them heal. Great job!
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February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved the moment when their bond reconnected - the whole scene was beautifully done, but that was especially poignant. I have the feeling at the end of the story that they will get through the pain they have caused one another. To go back would mean to open fresh wounds, and each twin knows, now, what that means to the other.
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February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You are evil! E-V-I-L! Ouch, to leave us like thatOL, OL, well ... you know the drill. More, please ... soon.
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February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*wide-eyed* ooooo... Wow. this is getting creepily good. I have the chills now. Please update again soon, I have to know what happens next!
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February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
There is a really telling point in the chapter: when Elrohir notes that it is so easy to hurt his twin because they are so much alike. However, the end of the chapter proves that they really don't know each other so well anymore. There are differences between them, and Elrohir may be guilty of misunderstanding his twin and the wound into which he continues to rub salt. Now that he has finally pushed Elladan to react, it will be interesting to see what he makes of the result.
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February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow this chapter had me in suspense to the very end. I was long oh my lord I could just feel both twins pain and especially Elladan's/ It was terrible how his sanity and emotions were slipping away. And then Elrohir kept pushing him which was dangerous but he was to far gone in his own pain to pay attention. Good job by the way on all the emotions and interactions between the twins. PLease update soon cause the suspense of the end of this chapter is killing me :).
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February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Need more!!
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February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful work - I love the mood you create. The setting of the story comes alive - I can not only see the garden, but hear the sounds of the night and feel the broken glass.
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February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, This is really good! I am very much hooked on your story. I can't wait to find out what happens between Elladan and Elrohir next!
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February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoa this is a dark and depreg fig fic. Why did Elladan run from Elrohir? And its cruel what Elrohir is doing but I guess understandable. Man hope you update soon cause curious as to what happens next.