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person Tinni
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A finally Legolas Angst. I am keen to see where you go with Maeglin.
person Kirameki
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, now I'm starting to feel sorry for Legolas! You make it increasingly difficult to decide whose side to take. -_-;
Oh, so that is their adversary. This doesn't look too good for our Elves and Dwarf. Ai! I can't wait to find out what happens next. Out of curiosity, about how long will this story be chapter wise?
person Rainien
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOL Legolas and Elrohir are both acting exactly as they should; Legolas has, for the moment, realized that he's been an idiot yet again and Elrohir is finally letting Legolas see just how much his idiocy hurts. To modify the old saying: Sticks and stones may break your bones, but words can rip your heart out.
person louise_oblique
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very good, really am woundering about legolas, silly elf

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person HHS
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I wonder what's really bugging Legolas?Why is he acting like he has to prove his love to Elrohir?All marriages has its ups and downs.I just hope that Legolas and Elrohir will work things out.
person kirameki
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*jaw drops another few inches* Oh. My. God. How could Legolas say such a hurtful spiteful thing! What's wrong with him! Even in the heat of anger that's no excuse! *whimpers* Poor Elrohir... He must feel terrible. I loved the ending though. Heh heh. Poor Gimli. 'dratted elves' indeed. *chuckles* I also love how Elladan can say they had sex without actually saying they had sex. Heh heh.
person Somali
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* My heart really breaks for Elrohir. Again and again Legolas has proved himself unworthy of Elrohir. *sigh* To relish towerower that one has over one's loved ones and use that capacity to draw blood is really terrible. Legolas is seriously lacking in my eyes. *sigh* Again and agin he hurts Elrohir's heart. Now he has succeeded in breaking the trust between them. What next?
person ammunett
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
While i love your stories I can't help but notice that its Legolas that is once again causing all the strife in the relationship. It would be quite nice if it were Elrohir at fault once in a while. Apart from that, keep up the good work!
person viewer
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I cannot believe Legolas said that.
person Dark Angel
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Baaah! How much longer is Elrohir going to take that??? And what on Arda is wrong with Legolas :(... I'll be waiting for the next chapter and I hope they come back home uninjured. I don't have a clue what those creatures are lol .

Great story!