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person Tinni
schedule February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
And the mending begins.
person kirameki
schedule February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! Will Elrohir be alright?! And right after that fight, too. Maybe Legolas will nurse him back to health *looks at author hopefully*. And what if more of those creatures come. *shudder* Those poor women being thusly transformed. Though at least they found the creatures weakness. It was a close fight at first. Oh, so much more can likely go wrong! I hope our heroes don't do anything too foolish... All in all, an excellent chapter, as always. ^_~
person HHS
schedule February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NNNNOOOO!!!!Poor Elrohir!Let him be alright please!
person Viewer
schedule February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Elrohir. Poor, poor Elrohir.
person Nia
schedule February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Waiting for the story to go on is t tot torture. I have only read one piece of LOTR fanfiction to match this one. You MUST write more NOW!
person Rainien
schedule February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HA! About time Elrohir told Legolas just what an ass he's been!
person Tinni
schedule February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting.
person louise_oblique
schedule February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good, fab, wonderful, fantastic! more please? ;)

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louise
person Aelin-uial
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, I must confess to being completely flummoxed. Usually when I'm reading a story I have some idea of what's going on but at the moment I just can't work out what is troubling Legolas and why his bonding to Elrohir isn't as complete as it should be.tualtually, I have one way-out theory but it's probably a result of reading too many mpreg stories .
It's LOVELY to see you making use of the abundant elven history of "The Silmarillion". It adds a wonderful richness and depth to your story. Thank you again for the daily updates, and for the 'planes'.
person louise_oblique
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow exciting!!!! I love this fic

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louise
:);)