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person kiki
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
F**K noooo, why Elrohir.He is always getting crushed and mushed.Please let him be okay.
person Tinni
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What place to end. Any chance of a second chapter today?
person Deathangelgw
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh that wasn't nice at all...leave us hanging like that!!! for some reason the castle and cocoons sound very familiar, but I'm not sure as to why juuuuuuuust yet. Mind muzzle...MORE SOON!!!
person HHS
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NNNOOOO!!!!Damn creatures!I hope that Legolas will find a way to Elrohir soon.
person Rainien
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ARGH!! Cliffhanger!!! Poor Elrohir. LOL For once his troubles are not Legolas' fault. Hopefully Legolas can get him out before anything bad happens.
person MPB
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi Deathangelw,
I don't know about the castle (or rather fortress) but I will confess to getting my inspiration for the cocoons from the movie "Alien."


person HHS
schedule February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank goodness Elrohir managed to survive his ordeal.
person louise_oblique
schedule February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very very good though I do admit I am seriously woundering just what is up with legolas

huggs
louise
person kirameki
schedule February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Eh heh heh. Gotta love Gimli. That was so great. He slept right through it. *giggles* I'm glad to see Legolas trying a little harder to make amends with Elrohir, as well as to see Elrohir re-warming up to him, even if it's not enough to make himly tly trust him again, at least it's not the cold aloofness he'd been showing of late. But geez Legolas, what a way to wake someone! ^_^ *chuckles* Great chapter. Can't wait to find out what happens. I wonder when Legolas will finally relent and allow Elrohir to take him again, instead of continuing his dominant role. hmmm.... Well, we shall see.
person Rainien
schedule February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well what do you know...Legolas actually seems to be catching on. Will wonders never cease? *S* Personally, I think that after this mystery is cleared up, Legolas needs to court his spouse. LOL I know I'd certainly like to see it.

Once again, well done.