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person Rainien
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Run, Elrohir, run!!

Gimli's fighting the spider-thing. Elledan's fighting the orcs. Elrohir's facing the Bad Guys. Guess it's up to Legolas to save the day.
person Tinni
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for so many chapters at once. I really enjoyed them and can't wait for the next one. :D
person Buttercup :o)
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yaaayyyy, two chapters :o). Big sigh of relief, Legolas to the rescue. And thank goodness for the tenacity of the dwarves.
person Inwitari
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is so great... Im so happy that ts ars are finally getting a little better... please write more soon.. thank you
person louise_oblique
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was excellent, hope leggy saves him

huggs
louise
person Cainthar
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a bit of a stretch for me. It kinda read like a Scooby Doo moment with the explanations and muddled dialougue. I would think the Lomion would have been a bit more prepared. I am also surprised that a building/fortress suchyou you describe could have been built without attracting just a little bit of attention.
person Talasi
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You are killing me with this cliffhanger! Its a good thing you update nearly every day. I'm still completely engrossed in this story. Perhaps this will snap legolas out of whatever daze he has been in to treat his mate in such a manner. If not, its nothing a good spanking at the hand of Elrohir can't solve. lol
person Jamie
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Can't end at that cliffy!!! wonder what's beyond that wooden door, the evil elf himself? You captured the suspense and adventure really well in this chp, and I don't know what to expect from one paragraph to the next.... I'm so loving it!
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Just when I think you can't pull of a more evil cliffhanger, you go and just prove me wrong! Gimli wounded, Elladan fighting for his life, Elrohir about to be *gulp* er, ravaged, eaten, killed? And what the hell is Legolas up to? Eresseeeeeee! Come back and put us out of misery.

Marie | ^_~ |
person Dark Angel
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AAAAHH nooo!!! How could that happen now! :( I so hope Elrohir can deal with the mad elven lady and that no bad surprises will be waiting for him in there... I'm not even trying to guess where you are going with this any more! Very good! Now I can't wait at all for the next chapter! :/